cool story

pretty good. hope you keep writing. thank you

Great story

Script format ruined the fic for me.

Well I am bit suprised no one else reviewed this story in several years, even if it's old. I suppose it's easier find now it's in cross over section. All being said I like the idea/plot of this story alot. 'Son of Washu' type of thing is always great, even if it's a little more popular in Ranma or OMG type cross overs.

I will say one thing really held this story back from being great was how it was written, script style format leaves alot to be desired. Not mention dialog where it carried the plot nearly on it's own. Since this story is 7 years old I can only hope the author has improved since then but it was still a good idea and everyone has to start some where.

Really great story.

Please continue the story, it was great.

I found 1 plot error though, Shinji visited Asuka in the hospital after her battle with the 15th angel, right. So, how did she wake up in Misato's home, was she released hrom hospital to return home with Shinji?

Here's a random idea, perhaps, the next chapter could be a flashback from the three children's point of view, telling of the events up to the point they are rescued... well I'd better stop babbling now.

P.S, please continue the great story.

Great story! Keep on going with it!

... I like your style even in its earliest form please continue..

I want to know what happens to Rei and Shinji _

Interesting. I like how this is done, if I were to compare it to hair dressing, it would be an Edward Scissorhand's original. Coming from me, that's exellent. I enjoyed this thoroughly. It's very scifi-ish. And I like the way it turned. out. It would be nice if it had or two more chapters, for the after-efects, and of corse, the double wedding. All and all, I give it a 10 for originality, and the novel- like after taste.

Ok, like I said in my e-mail I don't know that much about Evangelion (should I be ducking the rotten vegetables now?) but I liked the story. It was also interesting to watch as your style changed and matured throughout, chapter 6 being the best one in my mind. It will be interesting to read what comes next, how they all begin to integrate into a single extended family (albeit separated by dimensions).

Hi, all, I finally fixed Chapter 6 and have finished the initial draft of this story. Hope to revise it soon with the help of my pre-readers.

Thanks Andre and Datexan for all your help so far!

Hope to revise more of my current and older stories soon!

dennisud

This was very good, keep up the good work. I at least would not mind reading what happens next. Ja-Ne (_)

Oh great, Asuka's a god-child, just what her ego needed.

Seriously though everything actually fits together suprisingly well. I was kinda hoping Clay was Keel but the Gendo thing works too. I really like how you've merged three universes (TM TU & Eva) and intertwined them so well.

The addition of Nagi was new, refreshing and suprisingly Waffy (not that I'm complaining of course). The plot is really interesting and evolves from one thing to another without ever really dropping anything in between.

I usually don't like crossovers but I just can't get away at how well this fits. The characteristic shared by R/T and A/T, and the whole 'chosen children' thing works so well in this fic.

I actually think the dream sequences were my favourite part. Asuka's was touching a deeply significant to anyone whose watched enough of Eva and I thought Rei's was hysterical, her responses were so funny yet so IC.

Great story, all the better for the careful blending of three different series, not to mention making it work. A real acheivement.