I LOVE this!
I have been trying so hard to find a story about the bomb in Twilight but I couldn't find a single one!
I am so glad I found this.
Not only was it what I was looking for but it was also very well written and in charcter.Great job!

*smirk*

Neat bridge scene. It's too bad we couldn't have seen this in the episode. Thanks!

I really enjoyed this fic. I love your Atlantis fics too but I would love to see more NCIS from you!!

A great story. Very good.

Such wicked banter revolving round poor Tony. This was a great read, both amusing and yet creating sympathy for the vulnerability that Tony tries so hard to conceal. Loved also your portrayal of Gibbs who manages to watch out for his team, particularly Tony, without making it in the last bit obvious.

oh my goodness, how much do I love this! The lines, you've got some great dialogue, like watching the show. And this was the missing scene I would love to have had!

Great Story. Love it. Always thought that there was a scene missing. This fills the gap perfectly

great work. i love your stargate stuff as well. you should write more ncis! :)

Cute.

that fits in perfectly, and you have the characters PERFECTLY! fantastic!

Wow, I can't believe I haven't read this one yet. Great story. Or, interlude, I suppose. I enjoyed it all, but I especially loved the way Tony wanted Kate to go back to being her usual self, rather than caring and vulnerable. You had them all really in character. Great job.

I love it when an author does "missing" scenes, especially when they are done so well. Nice insight re: the thoughts behind the actions and dialogue...well done, very well done. Thank you

I loved this story, you have the characters so perfectly written. I could just imagine these extra scenes.

love it! great job