nice! i liked this one too

That was great. Well written and funny as all hell. The discriptions for Avalanche's 'other' lives were strangely spot on. Wow. An enjoyable read.

Your writing style is incredible :)
Made me laugh as well as think - the not-crispy blonde leader... gotta chuckle...
All your stories are incredible, I don't understand why the reviews aren't pushing 100!

The writing style, "run-on sentency and sloppy", was perfect for this fic. I really like your Yuffie and felt like I was in her head and that is how her mind would be operating. Like she'd downed a 72 ounce Mountain Dew (my favorite drink) and couldn't have stopped her thought process for any reason.

And yes, Vincent is always cleaning his gun in fics, even when it doesn't need cleaning and he'd cleaned it the day before and hadn't used it since. So for you to throw in the part about Yuffie smearing it with peanut butter was hilarious...finally he had a very good reason to be cleaning it...and the honey replacing shampoo part was great too.

I haven't read your yuffitines yet but I'm sure I will like them if the these two are anything like what you have written here and in Splinters.

:-)
mar

Ah...peanut butter on the gun.

And Vincent's revenge! Never thought he had it in him.

Very well written. Then again, I wouldn't know a run-on if it bit me on the nose, but I still thought it was good. :)

it was good but sorta confusing

Profound thoughts. Not so mature reaction. Good Yuffie presentation. Fun Vincent POV.

This is a pretty interesting view on what-if. I like it!

Great story, its very clever and the way you saw it was very interesting. The song is by Blink-182! XD

when you think hard, all that is true. *gasp* this was a great story, and i'd really appreciate it if you could write a second part! ( Haha, crispy so-not-alive Cloud XD )

"You all suck!" ahaha lmao XD i can't think of anything else Yuffie might say in her situation XD
i think that song was by blink 182? ngek, not sure myself XD
newayz, great work! i enjoy reading this fic ^_^

This was amazingly amusing - you capture Yuffie's voice wonderfully in the rambling style. And crispy not-alive Cloud and slum-rat Aeris had me laughing.

Great story.