That was a good introduction for a promising story. Keep up the great work!XD!

That last part is true. But it seems like later in the show, Ozai hates Iroh's guts (or thinks of him as a lazy traitor). Maybe something bad happened...Anyway, awesome job, keep it up!XD!

Whoah. How very profound of you. That seems like something Iroh would think of and fear. That was great!XD!

I like your work. That last one made me pity Ozai! keep up the good work and update soon.

More please.

i like it

plez continue

Yipes, you've captured Iroh and Ozai fairly well!

please update soon

I can guess who it is ]