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| mulus 2007-02-15 ch 1,  | abuseGood LORD, Shiro! Will you stop being so bloody PERFECT, already? |
| Erisah Mae 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseThis story is gorgeous- writing as clear as crystal, with tone that is tragic, yet poignant. Nice! Erisah |
| Contra Mundi 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuseFilled with depth and very well written. ^_^ I liked it. I, myself, have never been one for diamonds. Quite frankly, I'm not interested in jewelry. I liked the points you made in Rociel's bits. They were very elegantly written, but most of all, they made sense. Both of them were very in character, especially Rociel, but I expect you've had some experience writing them? XD Somehow, I can always imagine Rociel giggling. I can't imagine Cain doing it, nor Ludwig, but Rociel is completely capable of giggling. I liked the end. That was sweet. But what're material objects worth if they aren't given with the heart? (If I'm making sense at all...Words are muddled today >_ |
| IrisEclipsed 2007-01-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, just wow. Your writing, as always, is elegant and I loved how Rosiel spoke about the diamond and how it was ugly. Somehow I think he's kind of talking about himself, the stone is beautiful but it has an ugly history, very similar to himself, no? I might be going into it too much . . . or something. LOL. Great stuff! |
| Butter fly soup 2007-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseMy dear, I think you are losing your touch... Oh well, they can't all be hits. However, I did understand the gist of it, and I know that when you have the urge to write something, it has to be written, or else it won’t leave your head. Moreover, what do you care; this is just one bitch’s opinion. |