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| Darth Kiryan 2007-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe very first line i found to be extremely strange. '"Prince Anakin Skywalker, son of Shmi Bhraj Skywalker and Qui-Gon Jinn, adopted son of Emperor Cliegg Skywalker."' You ave a strange - but inventive imagination. It is a different take on the life of Anakin and his family. I shall read the rest of it and let you know my verdict. Kiryan... |
| swordbunny4486 2007-03-04 ch 12, | abusenice |
| ChrissyKat 2007-02-04 ch 11, | abuseAmazing chapter and glad to see they ironed out the problem enough to show some affection for each other and get through Shmi's funeral. Been waiting patiently for the next chapter and wouldn't mind reading one sometimes this weekend. *wink, wink*. The video rocks by the way and another great song. Give your muses a high-five for me. |
| ChrissyKat 2007-01-23 ch 10, | abuseYour killing me with these cliffhanger type of endings and all this angst. LOL. Another amazing chapter and at least they are married (officially) now. Of course, now they are fighting so...lol. Looking forward to seeing how Anakin gets himself out of the doghouse on this one. |
| ChrissyKat 2007-01-22 ch 9, | abuseAbsolutely loving this fanfiction. These two can't seem to catch a break. As soon as they are together again they get ripped apart. Was looking at the timeline thing and it has me very excited for the next chapter. Dying to know what is going to happen next. |
| ChrissyKat 2007-01-16 ch 8, | abuseMy god you don't make it easy for them do you? Now I figured that his parents wouldn't approve but now some crazy charges against him. Gee, thats gonna make things complicated of course. lol. You must have some amazing plan for these two and the empire in the future and I can not wait to see just what it is. Keep up the great updates. |
| ChrissyKat 2007-01-15 ch 7, | abuseOh yayness they made. They can't seem to stay angry with each other for long and who can blame them. I doubt Anakins parents are going to find their marriage very amusing even though us readers enjoyed it. Looking forward to seeing their reaction |
| ChrissyKat 2007-01-12 ch 6, | abuseAhh, whats a good Anakin/Dorme' fic without some angst. Of course it would be kinda boring if there weren't any angst. Another great chapter, I kept checking everyday for an update and finally it was up and I was so happy. I even did a little chair dance. lol. Looking forward to the continuation. |
| ChrissyKat 2007-01-06 ch 4, | abuseAhh young love, young, confused, silly love. lol. Keep up the great writing. I throughly enjoy your stories and look forward to reading more soon. |