This was a wonderful story! I loved that you depicted Anakin and Padmé's marriage as one that does have its troubles. That made it so much more real. Oh, and you did a wonderful job with Padmé's family. You fleshed them out very nicely. All in all, very well done!

I read this story and the last two parts made me cry. It was very emotional. Great job.

Hannah

I really liked this story. I love how you included the Naberries; people often forget about them. And you write Anakin/Padme very well. (:

I just realized I never commented on this fic after I read it a little while ago soooo here I go:

I. LOVE. THIS. FIC. Love it.

Great cross of emotions, sex, love, family, humor, omg everything haha. This deserves way more reviews.

Gee, talk about a mood killer...

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Such a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing this with us.

I REALLY love this story! Great job!

Very good story although would have preferred it if it wasn't as adult themed and I thought that Anakin and Padme fell out for too long. But on the whole very good. :D

Just a little correction. You keep using terms like paternal and patriarch when refering to Jobal but she's actually maternal and the matriarch.

Paternal Father

Maternal Mother

Fraternal Brother

Sororal Sister

This line was soo funny

"... Sith."

"What was that?"

"Sweetheart. I said sweetheart."

"I thought you did."

LOL Anakin just neatly covers up what he actually said teehee

You are a brilliant writer

Anakin the cookie thief...awesome! lol XD

I read this late at night. I was caugt up in the lovely nature of it. The heat, the passion, the whimsical nature of it all. Then, in the back of my mind I faintly hear the eerie, unmistakeable sound of Darth Vader's mechanically assisted breathing.

I loved the story and thanks for writing.

I loved this story! Great Job! :)