I have enjoyed reading this story. Keep it up.

M, I'll be honest; I've tried to read this story multiple times and have stopped. I don't really like Ginny, as a character and I'm aware of the fact you've stated you don't care so I won't build on that, but I will state, if I don't like her in Canon, and your story doesn't follow canon it isn't even Ginny, its an OC.

I must point out that you have done a lot of interesting research into assorted things, such as different languages etc, and it can be quite interesting, but I have to state again; its OC. They are British. Hell, I don't even think anyone in the series ISN'T British, except for Tri-Wizard schools, and the Bulgarian representatives at the World Cup. While it adds depth, it's not really necessary or particuarly wanted.

Also, Martial arts and swords.. Hmm. I like Swords being frank, wands seem to be absolutely useless against large numbers, unless you spout some crap about area spells, which would in my opinion tire the character out so fast as to not be plausible. Swords however nicely fit this gap, they are faster then spells, and much more efficient, not to mention are useful against groups of enemies.

The Martial arts.. Eh, not into it sorry. I understand its necessary for physical conditioning and what-not, but I just don't like its use in the Magical world.. It seems to be more of a Naruto thing, rather then Harry Potter.

Anyway, good luck on your story, and I'm sad to see you hate DLP. I'll be honest, its a very harsh and prejudice website, but they do generally leave helpful criticism which can help a story. Unfortunately they also are totally bias against certain pairings, which is understandable as they have experienced the character in canon, and you can't really alter a character much or it becomes an OC. I'll stop here, Cya!

yo sup its me again lol i red what you said at the end of chapter 26 wow lol that all i got to say i thought i trow my say in ther like most others i hate certain charecters cause of the book sorry i just cant seem to like them thers really no reason but where i defer from other is i still read the stories with them in it lik i hate slash stories just because of the fact that ther slash but i still read some of them because they are well written i fill people who dont read these stories with certain parings in them just because they dont lik the pairings or people in it because of they way jk rowlings made them in a book or whatever is there choice they are missing out on pieces of art and your right they have no right to tell you how to do anything allways remeber this is your artwork dont let the idiots put there marks on it lol i will end this review i got to get back to reding your story lol

well i must say from your comments from chapter 25 im offended i consider myself and idiot and i love this story lol just kidding couldnt resist. hey you story is written very wel its like a rollercoster ride in the dark you never know where the story peaks or turns or twists the story goes fast then slow your story is a work of art. hey if you could or you know somebody trustworthy im writing a personal story for my self only. i have very good ideas but they dont translate well onto paper and i need a good writer liki yourself to help me fix it and help with ides if you can do thia i would be one of your dark minions and serve your darkness lmao. my email is godamoungmortals@ im in despeate need of help. and my garmmer when writing aint to good either lmao

Curiosity Killed the cat, and Satisfaction brang it back. Good Work.

Horrific doesnt even begin to describe those...acts i suppose is the word ill use. I cant even think of what I want to say I honestly have the want to put my feelings into words but I cant seem to find the right ones, so I wont use any...

I would like to leave a review despite my personal opinions of the story. I thought that the characters were really well developed and that thus far you have done an excellent job of creating the perfect well rounded story. I thought you put a lot of time, energy and a piece of yourself into this story. I wish you luck with the rest of this story and your others. I think it has potential to one of the best well written novels in this genre.

~Riverlover

One word--OWNED.

REALLY AWSOME

Please continue :)

Hello,
I think I like your story but when I started to reread it.I checked it out on my computer I had two copies and they didn't match up do you have two version of this story? Please say yes...my author is moshpit did you change your name?



good luck

Miss Millie...

I felt that after reading your interesting authors note on this chapter that i needed to reply.
i am first to admit i am not a Harry/Ginny fan and it is from the books that i dont like her, but as i havnt read them since they were first released appart from the first 4 i cant articulate why.
But at the same time i am enjoying your different take on the HP universe and the Harry/Ginny relationship. I can see that they could end up together but at the same time as they have enough problems just being friends at this point it will be very interesting to see how it progresses.
On another note i am very happy to read your remarks as to the DLP site, i have very similar views on them.
Keep up the great work i still have another 5 chapters before i get to the end of your current update and enjoying taking the story slowly.
thanks again for the great read
SiR

I do like the story. Harry is very immature in this story, but I think you do a pretty good job at indicating why that is. My enjoyment of the story, however, is tempered by your ongoing arrogance in your authors notes. Your little vendetta with DLP is starting to remind me a lot of Harry's behavior, and is beginning to make me wonder if this Harry is more of a projection than a figment of your imagination.

I have never been to DLP and don't even know what it is.

We get that you're smart and have done a lot of stuff. Stop beating us over the head with it. I appreciate your story and am looking forward to the next chapter, but can you at least show a minimum of respect for your audience and lay off the arrogance and condescension?

Just so you know, I'm a fairly successful computer engineer as well, am over 30, have done quite a bit myself. I only say this so that in your arrogance you don't lump me in with the "DLP 12 year olds" you seem to abhor so much.

I welcome your response to this review, but if you're not going to leave me a way to respond back, please don't bother.

Well, in spite of your overly arrogant beginning author's note, a pretty good beginning. At least you can use good grammar, puts you in the top 5% of fanfic authors. And it's good that malfoy, his cohorts, and snape, all got taken care of before he could even get to school, although snape being the professor to respond to the accusations is somewhat convenient...

Hm very interesting story so far. Keep up the great work.

SeaBreeze :-)