|Reviews for Beginnings|
| Alliehalliwell 1/5/07 . chapter 4
felt like the ending was rushed but overall it was good.
Since you didn't have ages posted, what about doing something after this? You could easily expand this into a few more stories...doing something with Jarod/Parker's life and family then maybe Kyle's, etc.
I always like AU or alternate realities so it'd be cool to see what you would write.
| g2fan 1/4/07 . chapter 1
I just read the story. I liked it. The Pretender was one of my favorite shows when it was on. How did Jarod go back in time? That would be interesting to know. Will there be a sequel? I hope so. Wendy
| annependragon 1/4/07 . chapter 4
Ah loved this is there going to be a sequel by chance of what happens next in their changed lives. Or is there going to be something that almost takes the timeline back to where it was going originally