Yehey! A happy ending.
Love the epilogue.

it's such a cute story! kawaii!

I LOVE happy endings. I can't wait for more stories!

Wow. This was a cute story. And pretty unique too. I love fairy tales. :)

You finished a story...And YOU STILL POSTED ONE OF THOSE THINGS!

aww how cute
love the action

I loved your story so much. There were so many times that I caught myself smiling at all the cuteness.

oh nice one shika! oh noes! what shall ino do??

Wow! very interesting 1st chapter and very well written!! i'm hooked now! total faves!

that was a great story! Honestly, how did you come up wih such an amzing plot? It was too sweet at the end! I loved every bit of it!

very original story! i like :D

Aw...Aw...That was awesome!! Everything about it! It was so suspensful, but cute, I dunno if I should be reviewing right after I read it because I'm so happy right now. It's been a while since I've read such a good ShikaIno fic. This plot is all so original, lovely. The Story Master idea was interesting, I wish I had those creative powers ^^;
The beginning was kinda funny too, I just knew from chapter 1 that this was going to be a good story. I loved the part where Shika had a couple minutes to save Ino from going insane...That was really cute, I didn't expect that... But it was good :)
Awesome job, I'm sad it's over but it was just so awesome!! (Repeating myself again...)

aww!! its so cute! =D i really liked it!! good luckies with your future stories!! =)

OKAY IM REVIEWING!! DUNT HURT THE PUPPY!! SAVE THE KITTY!! T_T

Wow, this was such a kewl plot! The Story Master idea was awesome! Well done!

Keep on ritin!

It was SO CUTE! I like the ending. It was differnt and I just like it. Keep on wighting.