|Reviews for Visitation|
| Muddy Poodle 1/3/07 . chapter 1
...so basically, this story is absolutely brilliant. I loved every part of it. Each section (past, present, future) had a perfect choice of "ghosts", and each ghost was written with such precision. I especially liked McKenas Cole-you got his speech and attitude down pact...even his description with the "squashed nose" was brilliant. Everything he said was pretty much exactly what he would've said.
And the last "ghost" was amazing. Your last sentence in that section revealing the identity of that ghost was perfect. Wow. And the parallelism? Ending with your beginning? Genius.