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Oh! Poor Cloudie...
I like it so far lol great plot can't wait to find out what gave Aeris amnesia lol MORE!
Update soon!

lol at the author's note XD Actually I'm updating it this weekend
Anyways, this story has really entered the plot now! Can't wait to see Aerith's reaction and thoughts. Poor Cloud :( Hope Aerith remembers soon.

Wha? How can you forget Cloud? I would never forget him lol. Good twist! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I like it, update soon ^_^

Interesting development. I'm still interested, although I would suggest you try and find someone to help you preread and iron out the kinks in your story. Looking forward to more chapters.

very cute! You're really good at writing. Keep it up! ^_^

Cloud got his own personal sadist,thet's to funny,well,i can't wait till the next chapter.

I loved it! Hmm, I think Aerith comes back and then Cloud will confess, or maybe Zack gets in there first and Cloud's left watching from afar :( Poor Cloudy!
Anyways, update soon, I want to know what happens!

from this first chapter i can tell this will be a good story and i can't i wait for the next chapter.

Hey, that was really good. I smell an LT on the way. lol Still, I loved it. Put up a new chapter as soon as you can, okay?

I like it, you've got a great writing style. I like how you havent taken Zack or Tifa out of the picture and they are causing problems, like Zack being in love with Aeris. Update soon!