No, it was an awesome chapter.

"She has green eyes."

That's really cool. :O Fitting and profound somehow. I love it.

At first, I thought those soliloquies in italics were thought by both girls. It would have still kind of made sense, but Hinata is hard to make cruel, I guess. Sakura is easy, but I don't think she's THIS cruel.

Good jobs! I liked reading Neji and Shika's, too. I love NejiHina where Neji is a controlled, volatile, near-psychopath in love with Hinata. Okay I think you think I'm weird. That's okay too.

Cute. Adorable. Fantastic. Ahh, so many wonderful things to say about this wordedfully short exerpt ofth two's lives.

LOL, anyways, I loved it. I think you really had a wonderful grasp on Kakashi's personality.
I loved it when he threw his book into the bushes, haha.

Dang you had me going for a sec. I thought that she and sex with Shino or something.:( Nope just allergic to dogs

Kabuto is EVIL!
I love it thought, expecially the part with Sasuke!
UPDATE SOON

Poor Hinata, Sasuke is evil.
I love it thought expecially the reflection hes turning into ITACHI!!
(Exept for the hotness part)
You should do one with him!!

Aww sisterly love!!
I dont like Hanabi but hey i love it, finally they notice that Hinata is strong.

I knew it!!
When it said he had his sholders hunched I thought It was just a error or something but now I see!!
I love it, KakaHina weird but cute!

I cant help but love your oneshots!!
There so adorable love that he droped the book lol

Thats so cute, I love it!
HakuHina is cute havent read much about them but they sound kawaii together!
Love the Zabuza thing that made me laugh when she thought tha the thought she was a boy and that he was a girl...yeah lol

Ekk, that was hot! =P
Love the end, and that so rocked a chakura cake!!

Psh I hope she dosent cry! =P
Know I feel bad, I mean he turned good at the end but I just cant help but to hate him!
I love it thought!!

Lol that was funny!!
It braught out a hummer from all the seriousness from the previous chapters.
and oww Hinata is alergic to dogs.

Aww, GaaHina!!
That was so cute, I love that Gaara choose her as a bride.
and that was a missunderstanding...wow

Sakura is EVIL!!
I tell you she will pay dearly, and I love the green eye beast thing becouse she is.
Naruto is really that dense isent he