Oh, hell yeah! I read this on Deviantart too!

I love this story so much! Toki...

this is ** brutal.
Toki is my absolute favourite DethKlok member. HE'S SUCH A CUTIE.
god, with that teddybear and accent..
awe, this description was perfect. and brutal.

Very nice little insight into Toki's world. I loved it. You portrayed Toki very well. ^.^

Favorite parts:

"But first-class fingers got you nowhere with girls" *giggled*

"In self-defense he’d tried to join the band, but his parents cut him off faster than a rabbi behind on his quota of circumcisions."

You are a very good writer.

This was awesome! I really enjoyed reading it. This is one of the few Metalocalypse fanfics that was actually worthwhile.

i remember reading this on deviantART.this is a really good story.i like how you make Toki's childhood seem very imaginable,and it seems like it can really be integrated into the events currently taking place in the show.
good job!

+.:My Life Craves Pirates:.+

Love the whole damn thing! You really accurately explored Toki's psyche.

I'll keep this in mind if I ever do a Dethklok fic.

Wow! I Dethklok fic! Finally! And its about Toki. I love you.