love it...and another one bits the dust

Yay McKadman mush!

Great story! I love it!!

good begening really funny

::snorts:: my they are entertaining aren't they? lol very well done

A very good short story. I like seeing Carson get some attention.

Really sweet, loved the dialogue between them! Don't stop writing it, it's a story with great potential! :)

I loved this, of course! Why is it we can see all the possibilities of McKay w/Cadman, yet the powers still think they know best?

You write the characters so brilliantly, nothing should be holding you back now ;P

My computer's still in repair hell, so please excuse the spelling as I thumb-type through the mini - which was never meant for more than short messages (now I really want a blue-tooth keyboard, how pathetic can I get?)

TTYS!
~Inny

I think this story is really cute, and I eagerly await a second chapter!

hi.
always nice to see subtle Rodney/Laura stories. bravo, bravo.
you did superb on this.

happy new year.

I adore the Cadman/Rodney dynamic, and you're always so good at capturing that. Thanks for the great read!

Interesting insight there. Nice read.

A small spot of good in a tragity.

Awh, nice bonding during such a tragic moment.

its cute...i like