 rj1ofakind 2007-01-04 . chapter 1Okay, I love this concept. From the counting of days to Ryo and Dee still being in a relationship, even if not "dating". Ryo finally figuring it out. However, some of the story is confusing, it has to be difficult to try and explain the timeline and keep the story from being stagnant. The other thing I had trouble with was the party scene. The kiss between Dee and Ryo and the use of the party, they were drunk and both did stupid things, to move the story along I liked. The whole group of adults stripping, and other activities at the party not realistic. I am writing this review, because I really like the backbone and structure of this story. I think it could be awesome. |