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Reviews For: Blood Shift

Akili-chan 2007-06-18 ch 11,	abuseOuch, poor Alex. I was wincing about the wounds the whole time, lol. I also kind of like how Alex is still trying to figure himself out, and the Asazi part, it kind of made me sqee (mostly caze I'm a sucker for anything even slightly romantic) Good luck with work, and I hope it doesn't suck at all ^_^
Dudegirl 2007-03-09 ch 10,	abuseHey I really like where this story is going. Keep it up.
Akili-chan 2007-03-07 ch 10,	abuseWow, a very unexpected ending to chapter 10, I really did not see Dorian doing much of anything in this story and he ends up knocking out/ really hurting Alex (well, I'm assuming that he's hurt, being knocked out and all that, lol) I like how Alex really doesn't know what the heck he is doing and what is going to happen but at the same time he's going to do whatever he can to make things right. It does seem like something that Alex would do, even though it's a mental messed up Alex. Poor Fidget, I bet when everything is done she's going to be really annoyed with everybody because she didn't get to do anything herself or even film it. Which makes me wonder, what happened to Vinnie? I guess he’s run off and made a little lizard home with some lady lizard and has lots of lizard babies? Sorry, my mind comes up with weird things to ask, even if they don't really have things to do with the story. ^_^; I really love the memory and how everyone managed to avoid the dreaded OOC-ness that a lot of people tend to use. I also love the mental image of Fidget in about three or four layers of clothing and getting yelled at by Rikki that she should have put more in. I also like the fact that it shows another person besides the team and Brandon or the villains in this. The show really didn't show how Alex acted around the other people that he competed against. I also like how Asazi gets annoyed with him, though she didn't seem extremely worried about being blown up or something, guess she figured that if it came to that she would be able to get out of the ship or something. I have to ask, is Dorian a robot or cyborg? I think that in order to be a cyborg he has to be partly human but Dorian doesn't really seem to have anything human about him, unless it's his head, that seemed the only thing that didn't change about him when he went crazy. I also liked the part with the talk between Brandon and Alex, how Brandon seems to want to trust Alex but really doesn't know if he should. He also knows more about what could be happening then Alex himself seems to know, or at least Brandon seems to think that he does; all which is pretty interesting. Sorry that my review seems to move around the chapters a bit, I wrote it after reading them and it's a bit long as I'm more or less writing whatever is coming into my head at the moment. Oh, and I really hope that your muse decides to help you out really soon. -Akili
Akili-chan 2007-03-04 ch 8,	abuseWow, Colin seems pretty smart, though I guess it could partly have something to do with the fact that he's around a lot of very smart (though crazy, lol) people? I wonder if Alex is really to trusting, I mean one moment he's not trusting anyone and the next thing he knows he is leading about half of the team to rebel against X, though I guess since he's spent some time with all of them he knows what they're like? I like how he's really conflicted in this, not knowing if what he's doing and it seems like he really doesn't believe that he is who he is (if that makes any sense). Can't wait for chapter 9 and I’ll try to get a better review out when it comes out. ^_^ -Akili
Akili-chan 2007-02-27 ch 7,	abuseGreat chapter, though I have one thing that is sort of bugging me, well I guess it's more like two things but they're sort of related. The first thing is that we really don't know about all of the villains on the ship, like what they're like and why they're on the ship. You don't have to answer every little thiing about them, but a little bit of backgrounf info would be useful. Then we could know who it is that you're really talking about. Though you did a really good job of the intro of Dorian, really short but it gave us a idea of what he's like. The next thing is, how the heck did Alex manage to have a kid and not notice it at all? I mean, I would have figured out that he would have figured it out if the kid was born when he was in school/near when he got out of high school. Also, he had to have had sex with Mary in order to get the kid, right? Unless other stuff happened to him in high school, lol. Other then those two things is is really great. I like how you have Alex trying to keep walking a really thin line and not really knowing what to do. Though I somehow doubt that Fidget's gonna be able to keep hidden for the whole time, but you never know, she is pretty small and might know a few good hiding places ^_^. Hope you update soon Akili
Akili-chan 2007-01-14 ch 6,	abuseIntresting story still. I find it kinda cool that Brandon's in charge of the people still fighting, thugh I guess he's one of those who'll keep fighting, huh? Poor Alex, at least he's good now, though that's got to kinda suck to have to act like he's still the same when he's going to want to be killing off almost everyone he comes in contact with. Hope you post more chapters ^_^
Akili-chan 2007-01-08 ch 3,	abuseHmm, intresting fic. It's a bit confusing to me at the moment but I'm assuming that you're going to clear everything up, right? I like how you used stuff that really hasn't been used before (like Alex turning evil, well sorta evil) and that you manage to write it pretty well. Hope to see another chapter on this ^_^

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