YOU ROCK!
CONTNUE WRITING ASAP!
is hard to be descriptive and BRILLIANT at the same time, but you MANAGED!!
All Hail you!

O.o, I can't wait for more!

wow this is really sad, i cab;t wait till the next chapter comes out

Give to me MORE CHAPTERS! *pokes you with a sharp stick* If you don't, it wont be a sharp stick next time! It'll be a large club that I shall beat you about the head with! *coughfriendlyencouragementcough* XD

I'll blame his hysteria on the drugs then, 'cause he is not the type to be so angsty and irrational. No sir. :P Ooh... Ishida is so going to be strapped down to his bed after that episode. Poor guy. I'm also surprised no one came into his room sooner. I'm pretty sure something would have indicated his heatbeat rising on the machines he was hooked up to, and that alone would get the nurses running, I'm sure. If not that, the sudden flatline when he pulled them out would have. :P Anyway, interesting chapter!

Nice story! You've done a great job of mixing suspense and utter surprise, leaving us readers to beg for more at the end of the chapter and drawign us in to continue viewing. Beautiful descriptions as always and an interesting idea of circumstance! I can't wait to read more!

omfg, what happened to you?! this is angsty >.<
You're my favorite parody...author, random humor, etc! I miss teh old you! ...heh

*gasp* OMG! That's just... very...
I'm sorry, no words will come out probably because that's really awsome.

It's a good thins there's already a chapter two because I want to know what happens next!

It is a bit jumbled around the end. I was having a bit of trouble telling who was who and what view was from what. O.o... After reading it a few more times, I think I get it. Jeez, though! Poor Ishida. O.O... Even more, I am surprised Orihime was even able to leave the crime scene, but as said, no one really noticed her... but... Dude. Racey, dude. Racey. 'Glad to see the second installment though. I did not expect it to come along to fast! I'll keep a look out then.

Dude! I thought it disappeared completely. O.O... I read it again to see what you changed. ^^0... The pairing choice. Eep. I feel bad now. :P The characters are still OOC, but as said on my first review, I understand it is necessary to get the ball rolling! (I'll just quietly tell myself Orihime gets really lonely that time of year and saw Ishida's avoidance threatening. She did not want to lose a friend. She needs many friends to fill the empty space. O.o... Yeah! That's it. :P) Uh... there are still some typos, but I'm used to those. If you actually care though, there is a "calm" that is still "clam" and a "strangers" that is still "strangest". *Shrugs* Anyway, please, update soon.