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| Krimzon Flygon 2008-01-24 ch 8,  | abuseHiashi has NO idea how lucky he is to have stopped strangling Naruto when he did (Kyuubi Time!). Yeah. Update soon! |
| SilverMononoke 2007-03-04 ch 5, | abusei like it, and the second scene 3 is a lot better. i don't mind the nejisaku indulgence because i love that pairing. good job and update soon. |
| DimLight 2007-01-26 ch 5, | abuseanother great chapter :) |
| DimLight 2007-01-26 ch 4, | abusemeh, never really liked sakura so i don't mind her death :p but i loved this chapter. the fight was so much into detail, i felt like i was watching it on televison =] great job =] i worship you. |
| Quathis 2007-01-26 ch 5, | abuseIt was a good alteration of the canon of the play. So if Sasuke and Sakura have hooked up, will find love in this story or will he be the fifth wheel of Team 7? |
| whyamidoingthis01 2007-01-22 ch 2, | abuseI like the concept, I really do, but in all honesty, Shakespeare isn't my best friend. It's hard for me to understand it- so I'm afraid that I'm not going to be able to read anymore. It's really hard for me to understand most of ancient english, and I saw myself scrolling down pass the italics. I'm sorry, and I really wanted to read this story, but it's, just, hard, for me to read. Nice concept though, good luck! -Why... |
| vivverz 2007-01-21 ch 3, | abuseWow. This was quite nostalgic. I've never had a liking for Shakespeare considering he was the reason why I always fell asleep during my ninth grade year. Besides that, I always thought his writing was too archaic for me to understand. He practically invented archaic syntax. It was different, for a change, to read shakespearean dialect and have a story written in a somewhat colloquial manner. The prose is well written and very clear, so it was easier to adapt to the concept of the story. |
| xXbunnyholicXx 2007-01-20 ch 3, | abuseDid Sasuke and Hinata, like, get married or something? |
| xXbunnyholicXx 2007-01-20 ch 2, | abuseI haven't read 'Romeo and Juliet' since I was ...um... in middle school. Yeah, that's it! |
| DimLight 2007-01-12 ch 3, | abuseyey, sasuke and hinata are finally together ^_^ and hehe, now i wanna take another shakespeare class, in hope on landing "romeo and juliet" :P :) keep up the great work ^_^ |
| The Flying Pen 2007-01-03 ch 2, | abuseHaha! Excellent adaptation, methinks. I haven't read Shakespeare since high school, but this definitely brings me back. Such great dialogue, and every line has two meanings. :) I'm fine with the Shakespeare-ian dialogue - don't know how many will be OK with it. Haha, it's the couple I'm sad about. I feel like Naruto makes more sense as Romeo - young, brash - I can see him turning from Sakura to Hinata in one night - etc. But still, that's a personal bias. :) Nothing critiquing your writing. You know how to use grammar! Yay! And you can spell! So yes. Good luck! ~Pen~ |
| DimLight 2007-01-03 ch 2, | abuseholy hell, this is a wonderful idea and i love how you set the characters' roles :] awesome job :) |