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Pachelbel 10/21/02 . chapter 1
*thump thump* No, that's just me banging my head on the mouse pad. Why does FF.N hate the idea of me adding you (for the third or fourth time) to my Author's List? WHY?

Now then, to the review! It took me forever to see Moulin Rouge, which turns out to be lucky, because that's how long it took me to read any MR fics. And this is the only one of your stories I haven't reviewed (I think). I loved the interaction between Christian and Toulouse in this chapter. If I hadn't promised the computer to my little brother, I'd be able to read the next chapter, but that's for another day (probably tomorrow) :)
Torikar 12/31/01 . chapter 7
Hi ! Yor story is good, but your french isn't perfect...I unfortunatly winced several time while reading...

Est ton père ici? Hmmm...very shaky it should be Est-ce que ton père est ici? I know I know, it's must longer but it's the proper grammar...don't worry no one finds french grammar easy, even us little native. I give you a lot if point for the mansarde sentence...it's perfectly french ! J'ai les affaires means I have stuff. It's J'ai des affaires à régler.

The content of the story is superb, I love the way you played with the tension of Christian and his family. I'd like to read more.

I'm sorry if I critic your french, but it's just that the story is so beautiful and it does not deserve to have mistake. I could help you with translating if you want. I left you my e-mail.

Have a very happy new year...

Joyeuse année à vous l'écrivain de cette belle histoire.

Tori
RaeAngel 10/6/01 . chapter 7
Great story! Keep up the good work!
ceridwen-amyed 10/3/01 . chapter 7
I just LOVED this! The ending was so sweet... It really seemed like something that could have happened, fitting in with the characters and general style. Sometimes it's hard to capture that spirit but you did it so well! (If I knew what well done was in french I'd say it... ;))
Gedia Kacela 9/24/01 . chapter 7
Yay, another Star Wars/Moulin Rouge fan. I knew I wasn't alone in the world! Great story, very touching, and just all around AWWWWWW! I love Christian... This could be like, the Moulin Rouge 2 or something... okay, I'm rambling. Great job and write more MR stuff!
Ria 9/14/01 . chapter 7
Oh my God. ::blinks:: That was *beautiful*! I swear, it was amazing! You did such a fabulous job with this! I loved Christian's thoughtstream and how he reacted and such throughout the fic. ::grins:: This is going straight into my favourites!
marie spaceylilgirl 9/14/01 . chapter 7
awwww . . . i don't know what to say, that was good!
Darth Liela 9/12/01 . chapter 1
I loved the whole story! I forgot to review earlier, but I decided to now, cuz I wanted to add this to my favorite's list. This story is wonderful for catpuring Christian's suffering. I would have liked more violence and more fights between Christian and dear old dad, but hey, you can't win em all. Great story. Keep writing.
EloraSalecite 9/7/01 . chapter 5
nice addition with les mis. i never really made the connection there, but it does exist. good job.
ladytron 9/2/01 . chapter 7
i thought this was an alright story. good job.
ladytron 8/30/01 . chapter 6
oh this is good! please keep it going.
Sarah3 8/29/01 . chapter 6
yay for the plot bunny... lol... I'm really enjoying this story and glad to hear that there is more to come! *g*
diddly day 8/10/01 . chapter 5
Great,great,great!Lovely.I've seen it 7 times,8 next week.
Taskir 7/30/01 . chapter 5
Another wonderful chapter, *and* I discover you're an LM fan! You never cease to astound me. :) Have a safe trip.
Phoenix11 7/20/01 . chapter 4
I love it...keep it comin'!
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