LOL Bobby the profiler finally. BTW your Mike is such a delectable stinker! My fave Mike in any fic I've read.

I figured it out (I think). This would be part 2, which I loved. Jealous Bobby is always interesting and good. Working on part 3. I am about 2/3 of the way thru it. Nicole Wallace is always interesting. What a huge story this one is. I will review when I am finished.

Hehe I just re-read Intercession and then this sequel...you make me laugh, girl! And fan myself, during that loong sex scene that ended Intercession. Oh yes, that was enjoyable. Poor Mitch now, getting his ass handed to him...but really, such questionable fashion sense does deserve punishment!

...The Mitch scene made up for the presence of Sheila...Oh I love Bobby. I love him even more when he's being all protective and manly and stuff. He makes me happy!

That was really good...nice resolve for the Napoli thing and I love that you brought Mitch back. Nice to see Bobby get his ire up...and not just because Mike was hassling him, lol. Good times!!

if she can find someone’s digits in your pockets

Hmm, interesting line. i'm going to say that you are quite clever and did this on purpose. well, i love it of course. Although i have to admit, i don't really see Bobby being that out of control he strikes me as speak softly big stick. and i really can't see alex liking that. but i like it anyway sorry i sound mean well, i really do love it.

lmr

aren't they supposed to be keeping this secret mr this is my girlfriend, alex, and i am her boyfriend, bobby?

love that last line. would right more but gotta find out what happens, luv, LMR

Nice, very nice;)

Lol, I loved that. Mitch and Sheila should go run off together and leave Bobby and Alex alone lol.

Alright, that was the most satisfying part of my day period. What will it take for you to write a sequel? I'll give you anything you want! Well...almost anything.

Incidentally, I just wanted to point out how much I LOVE the dual POV style that you employ in both of your stories. It's really refreshing to see things from both points of view, but whats more amazing is that you, as an author, are versital enough to write from both Bobby and Alex's point of view without losing your voice and yet still making them seem in character.

You astound me! I'm really looking forward to whatever you have in store for us. A sequel maybe? Hopefully.

My personal fanfiction wet-dream? That you decide to start writing X-files fanfiction as well. Lol.

While I'm at it, I'd love a pony! *looks hopeful*

Good work, as always. :)

Okay, officially wins the prize for best last line. Ever.

“Mitch,” I said crisply, “I’d like you to meet my boyfriend.”

Oh...doesn't it just send tingles down your spine? You feel for poor Mitch because you know whats coming, even if he doesn't. And it's bad with a capitol "Bobby".

Man alive I can't tell you how happy I am that you have continued on in the Intercession universe. I hope that many more sequels follow this story.

That was priceless, SS. I completely forgot these two, or rather three, counting Mike, were serious-minded, comptetent detectives. They suddenly became ordinary people with the same failings, good and bad, right and wrong, that the rest of us have. You took 'em down off the CI pedestal and put them in the real world with me. What a hoot.

You wrote: “As if he wouldn’t do the same to us,” I snorted, loosening Bobby’s tie to make room for my mouth. “Why don’t you just tell him to go see Carolyn? Working up the courage to hold her hand ought to take him at least half the evening. We’ll be done by then.”

That popped up so many mental images…Alex’ having Bobby for dinner; Mike at the end of a phone call, getting all excited about being given an excuse to go see Carolyn and justifying himself to her “Eames made me do it, and no one can say no to Eames!”); Mike trying all evening to get to first base while Bobby and Alex are hard at it, and then Bobby and Alex smoking a cigarette contemplating Round Two while Mike is still at Carolyn's place hog-tied in terror!!

That made my day, SS.

But an even better picture was a looming, scowling Bobby ready to rip Mitch apart, piece by piece. Hee!

"After all, there was still that nagging weight in the pit of my stomach. That telltale pebble that rendered it impossible for me to be one hundred percent certain." Yeah, Bobby, you should be worried. LOL.

And my favorite part:

"And then the unthinkable happened.

He touched her.

“Whoa!” Mike ribbed me. “You better get over there, Bob—”

But I was already out of earshot."

I love it. This was a great follow up to Intercession. I am proud to have the honor of being your beta. Keep up the great work.

You know I love it. I almost feel sorry for Mitch. Almost.

That was perfect. I LOVED Bobby's reaction to Mitch.