gosh... thats heart braking... oh, dear obi-wan, you poor man. you lived a long happy life... may the force be with you always... *cries*

I loved it! keep up the good work!

*Chokes on tears*

Oh Gods, that's so sad. So beautifully written, and clever, and heart-wrenching, and painful to read, but terribly addictive and so, so sad. *Sniffle/tear*

Thank you for writing this, even though it made me depressed.

Cheers,

Estora

This is very good :) :)

*SOBS*

Damn you!

I love me a good tragedy, but they're always so painful!

This piece was beautiful, and that's saying something because normally, I detest conversation-only stories.

Good work :)

Well now I'm very sad! Poor Obi-Wan (he's my favorite... *sniff*) I agree, that platform-crushing incident looked REALLY bad when it happened... I liked the all-dialogue format, it worked very well! Great story! :)

very good.

I like the story. You indicated this was an exercise in an all conversation fic. I think you succeeded. Good job.