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The Holey Gred and Forge 6/1/10 . chapter 1I didn't notice any repetitiveness. "She turned slightly so he was able to catch a glimpse of her eyes. "I know I wasn't the best kunoichi." Her fingers brushed aside a strand of loosened her that managed to have escape the rubber band holding her hair together. "I wasn't really part of our team." Her voice began to shake after the last sentence." I'm not sure why, but I loved that sequence and the change in tone at that part. ""Kakashi-sensei." She let out a shuttering breath before continuing." - I think you meant shuddering? Anyways, I loved it. Bittersweet, but overall happy, just what I like. - Mei |
Red Shagging Couch 8/30/08 . chapter 1A great way to show the relationship between Kakashi and Sakura in a non-romantic way. Very sweet, and perspective. |
Fornever Tash 7/31/08 . chapter 1that was beautiful. |
sasukegrl 1/14/07 . chapter 1that was just to cute |
Alexandria18 1/11/07 . chapter 1Wow that was short as sweet. I could reall picture this happening in the real series. I liked it alot! |
pilkul 1/10/07 . chapter 1nice... very interesting thing about kakashi relating to her! bybyyu |
Miss Bug 1/7/07 . chapter 1 Cute. There are a couple of errors but overall I think you did a good job portraying the characters and their relationship. |
Maloan 1/4/07 . chapter 1 That was quite touching. A great way to show how Sakura has grown. I really liked reading this. You did a great job! |