I didn't notice any repetitiveness.

"She turned slightly so he was able to catch a glimpse of her eyes. "I know I wasn't the best kunoichi." Her fingers brushed aside a strand of loosened her that managed to have escape the rubber band holding her hair together. "I wasn't really part of our team." Her voice began to shake after the last sentence."

I'm not sure why, but I loved that sequence and the change in tone at that part.

""Kakashi-sensei." She let out a shuttering breath before continuing." - I think you meant shuddering?

Anyways, I loved it. Bittersweet, but overall happy, just what I like.

- Mei

A great way to show the relationship between Kakashi and Sakura in a non-romantic way. Very sweet, and perspective.

that was beautiful.

that was just to cute

Wow that was short as sweet. I could reall picture this happening in the real series. I liked it alot!

nice... very interesting thing about kakashi relating to her! bybyyu

Cute. There are a couple of errors but overall I think you did a good job portraying the characters and their relationship.

That was quite touching. A great way to show how Sakura has grown. I really liked reading this. You did a great job!