 LoneTread 2008-01-20 . chapter 8Great story. The last line almost made me cry, what with the cancellation and all. :( But it made for a perfect ending. |
 moonhowler15 2007-12-02 . chapter 8“No matter how hard things get for you Maia, I will never, ever let you go. I will fight for you, I will do whatever it takes. Remember that, okay.” Ohh…you’re gonna make me cry :( Seriously, that whole chapter was so sweet.
“It’s what keeps us going. Wanting to know what’s over the next hill.Even if we know we will never find all the answers... we have to keep on asking the questions.” Perfect last-line to the story.
I hope you write another fic soon! :) |
 moonhowler15 2007-12-02 . chapter 7Amazing chapter! I’m about to read the last chapter, but I’m hoping you’ve given them a happy ending. As bad as I felt for Diana, the part of me who loves Tom and Diana’s friendship was kind of enjoying the first few paragraphs, with Tom holding her back. |
 moonhowler15 2007-12-02 . chapter 6“They felt like this was only proving societys greatest fear - that humanity’s natural compassion is slowly being bred out of us.” I thought that was a really interesting line on the future people, considering what we’ve seen of them so far. They do all seem to be indifferent to the problems they are causing in so many lives. |
 Jewel88 2007-11-23 . chapter 8i loved your story!! THANKS!! |
 jake876 2007-11-16 . chapter 7 this fic is truely awesome!
hope to read more soon |
 baldwin123 2007-11-11 . chapter 6 excellent chapter!
hope mia is ok
update very very soon! |
 Jewel88 2007-11-07 . chapter 5i must say, it's looking awesome! update soon! |
 moonhowler15 2007-11-04 . chapter 4This is a really great story! I'm dying to know what happens next and I love your writing of Diana and Maia. |
 baldwin254 2007-11-01 . chapter 4 this is an excellent fic
really well written
more soon plz! |
 MileyKapri 2007-05-30 . chapter 3so. . .yeah.
if you dont update i think i will die!
i really think i will!
i love this story! |
 zeusfluff 2007-02-12 . chapter 3Oh! Another great chapter! I hope you update soon! Thanks so much, ~zeusfluff~ |
 Jewel88 2007-02-12 . chapter 3LOVED IT! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
 Jewel88 2007-01-11 . chapter 2love it! update soon! |
 Jewel88 2007-01-10 . chapter 1LOVE IT! i love 4400 fanfics and they are so rare! THANKS UPDATE ASAP! |