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reader-babe
2009-12-08 . chapter 7
please update good story
Gandalf the Grey-Edelwiess
2009-11-29 . chapter 7
I loved it! Update soon!
Gandalf the Grey-Edelwiess
2009-11-29 . chapter 6
I...Loved...IT...too...sleepy...to...continue...
Gandalf the Grey-Edelwiess
2009-11-28 . chapter 5
I loved it!
Gandalf the Grey-Edelwiess
2009-11-28 . chapter 4
Ciúbanna Sugar, ciúbanna siúcra, ciúbanna siúcra siúcra siúcra!
Gandalf the Grey-Edelwiess
2009-11-28 . chapter 3
I loved it!
Gandalf the Grey-Edelwiess
2009-11-28 . chapter 2
I loved it!
Gandalf the Grey-Edelwiess
2009-11-28 . chapter 1
I liked it!
Echo Moon
2009-11-20 . chapter 7
please update soon. this is really good.
bookivore
2009-07-10 . chapter 1
I'm just adding some words of encouragement here. I hope you get back to your writing but even more best wishes on beating that depression and other issues. The only thing I stumbled on is when Dumbledore is talking about the past he does not mention the prophecy and I forgot that you had said in the 1st chapter that there was no prophecy in this AU, so I was wondering if he was hiding it (more than in canon). Otherwise, your Harry & Hermione are interesting and the plot is intriguing.
WolfbainKohaku
2009-06-29 . chapter 7
I really like the story. It's quite interesting. At first though, when I saw the date from the last time you updated, I was a little annoyed, because this is such a good story. But then I read your profile, because I know that sometimes a writer would post the reasoning behind their delays, and found that I had no reason to be annoyed. I just hope you get better from what your going through, and update soon. It's a great story, I really really like it. Good luck, till next time. -WK
ARedHair
2009-05-23 . chapter 7
Interesting story line and some good thoughts about the process of learning magic. Nice shift into the HHr relationship with Hr helping H prepare for the Tournament.

If you don't decide to continue, perhaps you'll feel like posting an outline of the rest of the story.

Take care of yourself.
blklover
2009-05-16 . chapter 7
great story please keep up the good story can't wait to read what happens nexts
EDelta88
2009-03-11 . chapter 4
sorry but this is just not to my tastes,there's nothing wrong with it, you're just taking to long to go anywhere
riegert8
2009-02-12 . chapter 7
good story
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