Reviews for The Opportune Moment

Reviews For: The Opportune Moment

rushtogether 2007-09-23 ch 1,	abuse"examining his fingernails." AHAHA. I love Jack. But I love Willabeth more :)
Topgallant 2007-07-11 ch 1,	abuseVery nice. Ah, if only that happened. It would've saved them a whole lot of trouble.
Hermioneee 2007-06-28 ch 1,	abusehaha. love the ending. my big pet peeve is bad grammar/spelling/punctuation, so my compliments for having none of that. well done.
Da One Me to Pwn You All 2007-06-17 ch 1,	abuseHaha! I love Jack and I love WE fics. This was the best of both worlds.
Red Bess Rackham 2007-02-28 ch 1,	abuseHaha, that was wonderful. Jack's dialogue was perfect. Great little fic. ~Red Bess Rackham
HeartOnYourSleeve 2007-01-17 ch 1,	abuseI was wondering if anyone would write about this little moment. Nice!
Joan Marie Mesi 2007-01-12 ch 1,	abuseWell, I reviewed and thoroughly enjoyed your other two "would-have-beens", so I thought I owed it to you to read the third. You captured Jack perfectly! Go Well, Joey Marie
Nerds United 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abusevery cute! i like it. :)
orlando's-girl-4eva 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abusei love it! Have added it to my favourite stories. well done
golfgoddess93 2007-01-04 ch 1,	abuseI Love your story so much! The whole time I was all 'Ah!:):) How Sweet!' OMG! You should do like a follow up story or something, you know because if this happened, the whole story line afterwards would be changed. You could put what happened after this kiss...just an idea...GTG!! BTW: Welcome! It's so nice to have another W/E'er aboard our lovely ship!:D -golfgoddess93
JeanieBeanie33 2007-01-04 ch 1,	abuseSweet scene! I half wish it had been like this, but in the movie Will told at an opportune moment, too (kind of). He made it an opportune moment, anyway.
williz 2007-01-04 ch 1,	abuseAw!! That was a cute "what if" story! One of the cutest. I always wondered what would have happened if Will hadn't said the whole fiance thing in that scene. He said it and Elizabeth looked so incredibly distraught like "DAMN, I DO HAVE A FIANCE! DAMN!" I was like DOH WILL!! smacks forehead But this was great! Good job! -williz
BadLilBirdies 2007-01-04 ch 1,	abuseSo cute! I loved it.
Shani8 2007-01-04 ch 1,	abuseAw...what a cute fic! I love it, and it's awesome that you're a W/E shipper since we're so few and far between nowadays. :( Anyhow, cute story, and I hope you write more. BTW, if you like POTC and W/E, please come join us at the hidetherum dot net forums. It's a cool place to hang out and discuss all things POTC and W/E. It's also a safe haven for us to enjoy the W/E relationship without being constantly shot down by the opposition. So do check us out, and hopefully you'll like us enough to stay! :) Love the story, and hope to see more from you. Happy writing! W/E forever! ~Shaliza :) _ "Laughter is timeless, imagination has no age, and dreams are forever..."
1.more.time. 2007-01-04 ch 1,	abusei like it! i wish you could contiue!! -Nicole

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