Wow. That works so well. You seem to have captred the essence of 5's secret musings.

very good. but I'm wondering at the last line, what will her eyes don't see, and will never again hold?

Wow, amazing! *applause* I love it!

I love it. It's really deep, and it's awesome. It's going on my favorites. I don't usually read rated t fics, but I read this one, and I'm glad I did.

That was really deep and thought provoking. I really liked the way you described the emotions that constant fighting will cause. It really showed how the children of the KND force themselves to grow up faster despiite their cause. Very impressive.

wow... this is unbelievably wonderful. you put so much angst into this story, so much denial. I commend you for your achievement in making the world see the ugliness of battle, and in seeing that kids often see what they are not ready for, and are shunned by what they need most--emotion. great job! THis is going into my favorites!

I have to say that I'm glad I'm the first to review, because this means I get to be the first to tell you how beautiful and inspiering this story really is. My, over all the fanfics I've read threw about the KND, this tops them. Really. *claps* I just want you to know that.^^ I give you a 10/10 XD