Come on write more please!! I love it! ja ne!~

KAWAII 2 DA MAXX! ja ne!~ UPDATE PLZ

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MORE!

"But Kyo noticed. He noticed the eyes, a little wider than normal, with thin lined at the sides" ...with thin lined at the sides? What does this mean? (so confused) I reread the line about five times and then just gave up. I don't know what's lined around the sides of his eyes. (cries)

Anyway, love the action, but I'm not a huge fan of the addition of your author's notes into the body of the story. Before and after, more than fine. But in the middle of it really breaks my concentration on plot and what's happening, and I enjoy it less. Sorry to be a downer there but it's true.

I enjoyed the purring immensely. Kyo SHOULD purr! I love it!

"Neither Kyo nor Yuki were aware of exactly was had happened to make them" the "was" here should be "what".

(sigh) lovely. SO lovely. All the reactions I documented in my first comment apply twofold.

At several points I stifled a squeal, a giggle, and generally grinned the whole way through. I just love Yuki/Kyo parings. AW. It's so wonderful!

THE STOEY IS GETTING BETTER.

Ahh great fic.
I can't help but smile while reading through each of the chapters.
Update soon, k?
; D

Woah, this is my first time reading this fic.
x D when will this fic be updated though?
I don't think I can wait for the next chapter

are you dead... its been FOREVER since you've written... exactly 11 months and...14 days... TO LONG! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more!... thank you

i see you haven't updated for a while but OMG YOU HAVE TO
GAH
i'm going to die without it!
it's like happy pills!

keep going

Aw! This story is so sweet! It's made me go into many, many near-giggle fits. I absolutely loved it when Kyo purred ^_^
Your writing style is fantastic, the story's cute... You rock!
Can't wait for the next update!!

Take care!
- Kat x

wah! please please please update! i have been waiting soo long (ok, not really i guess...but come on!) i need updates to breath, and you're not posting anything!! wah! so anyway, please update, and even if you dont...i guess still thank you for even writing this much

I already read this chapter, I just had to do it again since i hav free time in skool now! luv this story so much!

omg this story is so cute! thank you for blessing us with your words!! i know is been a while since you've updated (okay, a LONG while), but please please please update soon? maybe a lime for the next chapter lol...