Sorry mate, but I don't think you should write a sequal.
"Giant greats!" He exscreamed! - what the hell is that even supposed to mean? I think you should learn how to spell, learn some grammar and sentence structure and also some basic physics before writing any more science fiction stories. You do realise that nothing gets out of a black hole, right? That's why they are black, no light can escape once it is pulled inside.

Keep trying

ps: also, anyone who said this fic was good, you need to re-evaluate your ability to judge literature.

This isn't bad for a five year old. Good job.

You not only took tradition halo and made a creative twist to it, but you also made a story that dwarfed the true plot line of halo.

lolololololololololololol newb

ABSOLOUTIE BLCOCALKS LOL

Fantastic! A true wonder!
Uhmm, the plot was lacking in rising action.
Couldn't quite wrap my mind around the conclusion.
Kind of sudden, you know?

You have great potential as a writer.
Older works of yours are even impressive.
Update more! <3

The title was very misleading...

But the story underneath was good.

IT'S ACTION TIME!

Legendary. Just legendary.

Started better than the rest of your fanfics but then fell into a black hole.

I was actually wrong about you, your fanfic was actually okay (I don't know what made you wrote that god awful Castlevania fanfic) but I could sense no spelling errors, a little bit of grammer error though. But this feels kind of decent compared to your other work. Keep trying, and maybe you'll get better.

The best quote ever!

When the emergency was over, he said to the radio, "What is the message?"
The radio said "No, John. You are the demons"
And then John was a zombie.

And then Master Chief was the Flood.

Good god, this is the best thing I've ever read.

IT'S ACTION TIME!