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BelieveInMiracles3099 5/17/12 . chapter 1
It's really refreshing to read a good Star X Robin fic that actually has good grammer, and a solid plotline. It was funny too! EPIC WIN!
BlatantBookworm 5/15/12 . chapter 1
Cute. Like the character interaction.
StarCatBurning 2/4/12 . chapter 1
Hahaha I loved this story. Especially the end part. Robin would have nightmares about mistletoe for a month after this incident :) And you captured Kitten's character just right.
Elivra26 12/8/11 . chapter 1
Ha! Ha! You've got to give it to Robin for pulling those gravity-defying moves! Nice job!
AnimeGirl9894 8/16/11 . chapter 1
I loved it! The part where robin was hiding from the lasers and kitten called him spiderman! Hahaha it made me laugh so hard!
Concolor44 2/27/11 . chapter 1
The armpit-sniff clinched it. Top-notch work, man!
kittiekat10105 2/17/08 . chapter 1
Kitten is a freak.
highlander2973 12/21/07 . chapter 1
Ahh, this holiday story isn't quite as good as ChristmaHanukah...but it's still charming in it's own right. That Kitten never quits does she? Good work dude!
M.C. Castle 4/21/07 . chapter 1
Nice. A lot of action, and a good ending. Another great story. Keep up the good work!
SushiChica 3/17/07 . chapter 1
The ending was ADORABLE. As was this oneshot in general. Something about Kitten's room covered in laser-beam mistletoe makes me laugh hysterically. Well, as much as I can with my mother giving me weird glances and wondering what's so funny about ecology. Starfire's just so damn cute, and Robin's fear was perfectly justified. You'd think Kitten would just give up already.

Small nitpick:

"The door had looked like flimsy enough wood to break through, but it was sturdier than it looked, and now his shoulder ached from the failed ram attempt."

Your use of 'looked' twice in the same sentence kind of snagged the flow of the sentence. Aside from that, though, it was perfect.

A great Christmas oneshot. Good luck with exams and essays and the like, Cid. ]

-SushiChica
Akinyi 1/24/07 . chapter 1
That sounds exactly like something Kitten would do. lol poor Robin. Great fic, it was fun to read _
Forlorn Melody 1/9/07 . chapter 1
Excellent use of humor. That is all.
The Silver Phoenix 1/5/07 . chapter 1
Cute story :) Keep up the good work!

The Silver Phoenix
Franchise 1/4/07 . chapter 1
This just proves that the old saying is true: Everything is better with lasers. An enjoyable holiday tale with the crtzyiness of Kitten and an hiliarous ending with Starfire. Nice.
MrRigger 1/4/07 . chapter 1
The weird thing is, I can see both Kitten and Starfire doing what they did. Really well.

MrRigger
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