nicely done. but chapter could have been just a ittle longer

Wow! Great! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Sad chapter!

Please update soon!

Please!

omg! i love this. its so cute and serious in some bits, but the scenes with the girls are hillarious and omg the first thing i thought of when i saw the vanessa carlton lines was white chicks hahahaha omg this is awesome you must continue !

Good story but you need to work on grammer errors. You might need a beta reader or help on it.

Hope he comes back!

Awesome chapter!

Update soon!