Although the slightly cliched story, I thoroughly enjoyed this. I liked how Lily actually played Quidditch, as in most fanfictions she won't even touch a broom. It held other unique points thus making it less cliched. I really enjoyed the story and hope to read more works of yours!

Wow. I find lily really annoying and hysterical here.

I loved this story! It was so sweet and cute and funny :)
Lily was really annoying me to death at some points, but I did like how she actually stopped to consider she could be wrong at some points. In a lot of stories characters tend not to doubt themselves at all until it's all thrown back in their faces. I think having doubts is more realistic. I also liked how you showed her train of thought a lot and the different scenarios she came up with to explain what was going on. And I liked how Lily realized that she may have a biased perspective and could be perpetuating her delusion because of her desire to protect herself from her own emotions and change. It was fun to read.
I also liked Sirius a lot even though he was obnoxious :) I was rather disappointed he didn't end up with Marlene because I was kind of hoping for that based on how they were acting a few chapters back... They would've been cute, yeah? ;)
Oh, well. It was still great!

Every time I read this story it gets better and better ]]]]]]]]

James was a chaser. The confusion began because in the movies they made him a seeker.

Wait a minute, is James talking about Lily when he said "she's so bloody annoying" or was he talking about Amelia because that part confused me.

If he's talking about Lily then I'm going to have to slap him upside the head but if he's talking about Amelia (and I highly doubt that he is, the girl's not onto him for anything) then it's completely understandable.

I love this story so much! It's one of the first fanfics I've ever read, and I'm so glad I did! Thanks so much for writing :)

Omg this is amazing I love it 3 aasgjllkgdahkg I can't even

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I love love LOVE this story! :D Great writing style :D & your Disclaimers.. Love them! :D

the 1st time snape called lily a mudblood, it was an accident. he LOVES lily. he is nice to her. he is AWESOME. except for the temporary death eater thing which stopped when lily was threatened.

I just love this story, this is my second time reading it, I just can't get enough of it : ) Really good job well done.

Amazing. Just amazing. I can't think of a better way to describe it. This is definatatly one of the best fan fictions that I've read. You are a wonderfully gifted author and I encourage you to continue your works on the path to greatness. ( or at least getting recognition for your wonderful writing.) again, this piece was amazing! Thank you!

Amazing. Just amazing. You are a wonderfully gifted author and I encourage you to c

Wow. This fic was very different from many of the multi-chaptered JamesLily fics I've read. I have never read a fic in which Lily plays Quidditch for the Gryffindor team. It was really creative. I really enjoyed reading this.
This fic is shorter than most multi-chaptered "novel" fics but nonetheless, it was great. The plot and idea were extremely creative. I love the ending and the bet was a great idea. I had wondered why you had given an OC the same last name as Lily but I eventually figured out that the bet was about Amelia and not Lily (I figured that out a few paragraphs before Sirius actually reveals the bet xD).
The story was well-written and I didn't catch many typos or grammar errors. The relationship between James and Lily was perfectly portrayed and I loved the fact that Lily played Quidditch even though it's not canon.
I really enjoyed the story. There were so many times when your humor in the story made me laugh. This was a great story and I loved it. Great job!