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renniespice
2007-02-08 . chapter 6
Loved the update! Want to see where you are going! Update again soon!
CatBeist
2007-02-08 . chapter 6
All these chapter endings leaving me hanging... man this Iris sure is full of surprises... Really happy that the - what seemed to be a made up story - about the house really wasn't... lol. I got way into that story and got slightly bummed when you left us hanging thinking Iris was just yanking our chain...

And actually never saw the "special" car being pulled so you supriced me there, though I do thing it's a cool idea and can't wait to see where you bring this? Or how they'll get out... though is the front door out of the question?

Anyway :) Think you are doing great with the story and the humor here and there... :) Don't ever give up on this! :)
-Beist
historylover
2007-02-08 . chapter 6
Love it. And, good change. And, it was a funny change "Being all female and that." Hee hee hee

Kat
Poaetpainter
2007-01-29 . chapter 5
creepy chick!
renniespice
2007-01-27 . chapter 5
Nice! Looking forward to seeing where you are going with this! Update soon please!
historylover
2007-01-26 . chapter 5
Again, good cliffie.

Can't wait to read chapter 6!

Kat
CatBeist
2007-01-26 . chapter 5
Dude... Is she evil? Why why why... why is all the fun girls always evil? Is that the SN way or what?

Man I really liked this chapter... the story... even though the big picture is probably Iris and not the 'made up' story from Iris still dragged me inn... lol... but if this is not the story... a tiny bit disappointed... but not in a really bad way... more in the 'I pictured the old house.. as in if we'd seen it on screen it would go from dusty old to what it used to look like in happier days' and that the spirits always got stuff back to the way they were whenever any intruders had trespassed and they had to kick em out...
But... You twisted it... You evil evil you!
Did I say you did good... REALY good! Man many more should jump onto this fic... It deserves it big time...

Huh... you got a rant... lol... it happens...
Beist :D
CatBeist
2007-01-23 . chapter 4
*jumps up and down*
"I wannah see, can I see, I wannah see I wannah see I wannah see what's up with the house..."
*faceplant*
M... You left me hanging... I got really curious...
Hihi, can you tell I like... cus I do... :)
Bring on the long chapters!
historylover
2007-01-23 . chapter 4
As I said, the longer version is better. It feels like it's starting to move.

Can't wait to read chapter 5!

Kat
CatBeist
2007-01-14 . chapter 3
Oh no... is this the end for now... I wanted more :(
I like it a lot :) And Dean had one SMOTH transition from getting case info to pick up line... haha...
I wouldn't mind reading the one with even more funny'ness in it... not sure if you got my mail... might think you do but I am not sure... if you don't tell me and I'll pass it over... :D
Way cool fic!
historylover
2007-01-10 . chapter 2
You know I like this story. :D

Kat
Nvrmore
2007-01-09 . chapter 2
Ha ha ha. Hey, One good turn deserves another.

You do well with the humorous. Keep it up, Sweetie.
Nvrmore
2007-01-09 . chapter 1
Lol. Cute beginning. What Dean wouldn't do for a woman and information. Hee hee.

Sam's gonna have fun when he hears what happened.
SilentLucidityx
2007-01-08 . chapter 2
lmao, oh priceless. Sammy singing, gotta love that. Keep this up, I want to read about his five minutes of fame ;)
xJazminex
2007-01-08 . chapter 2
Hee, lol! I'm still laughing and i finished the chapter ten minutes ago! please continue, it's great.
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