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Reviews For: Fractures

Muria 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abuseThis is perfect for Aughra! A backstory spoken almost in her voice, before the start of the movie... The style of this piece fits the atmosphere and works very well. The characterization of them all is fascinating. Arrogant and heartless "Shining Ones," a failed hero, a doomed sidekick, a 'perfect' love interest, and the watcher who knows so much more... Very nice.
CinnamonSugarVampire 2008-03-24 ch 1,	abuseI absolutely love this story, brilliantly done.
Animated Crime 2007-08-13 ch 1,	abuseGood story, and well developed. I like how you tried to capture Aughra's voice (and succeeded admirably!). But what I like even better is your description of the UrSkeks - it's very apt and in keeping with the movie's theme of duality. No complaints, really. More questions: did you get any of this from behind-the-scenes stuff? I never got the impression from the movie that Aughra was ever a servant of the UrSkeks - she seemed rather contemptuous of them if I remember correctly. But anyways, well-written!
Aoife129 2007-04-23 ch 1,	abuseyou've definitely got aughra's voice down pat! excellent work--i love that it comes full circle.
Prima Raven 2007-03-10 ch 1,	abuseI like that. Very Aughra like.
Anonymist 2007-01-15 ch 1,	abuseOoh! A fascinating alternative. I like the intense way the story is told, very Aughra-like.
oh-you-pretty-things 2007-01-14 ch 1,	abuseNeat story!!