WOW! Nice job so far Swing! You REALLY Need to UPDATE THIS! PLEASE! Keep up the GREAT WORK!

~Streak

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this story is great! if you can, continue the story. YOU HAVE GOT TO CONTINUE THE STORY!

will you please make more it really good idea!

Great story!

I liked how you slipped the name "Watterson" in there. I'm also going to go out on a limb and guess that the Manchecks and that other family were either creations off some whacky show or relatives of yours.

Another thing I liked was how you described anime: "Yelling at each other and jumping around dramatically."

100/10! (not kidding)

ya kinda went overboard with the toothpaste and the lip balm. You should have put a chocolate frosted sugar bomb candy bar.

Heh this should be interesting...

Funny time. This is a lot like Home Almone

I can imagine Calvin actually saying that.

Can't believe how much awesome your story has.

And thus, the investigation comes to a close. Good chapter.

Can't wait to read more.

Ho boy, I see where this is going. Great job by the way! Keep up the good work!

Hm, I never got into Home Alone. Good story, though.

great story so far. I was wondering if miscrasyaboutfanfics and i could use socrates and the inventions you made up for our fanfiction, please send reply,

TJSfirelord