Whoa, Asch and Noelle? How on earth will that happen? o.O;; I don't think they ever met...have they? I wonder if Natalia would get upset. And then Guy can cheer her up...yeah, I'm such a dork xDD

Lol! Luke is always falling behind. Hehe, the little akward moment between them. Luke is so slow, both physically and mentally. Tear keeps calling him an idiot haha xD

Anise and Jade, they seem like a father and daugther scene. So sweet. =)

You did well, the characters well written nicely. Keep up the great work =D

*possibly the random GuyxNatalia fan* xDD

Awesome chapter =3 This was a really good fanfic ^^ *saves to favorites* =D

I loved the last two chapters; wonderful job on them ^^

I especially liked how you protrayed their friendship in the Anise and Jade one, especially when she falls asleep and he carrys her back to camp on his back, that part made me smile.

Luke and Tear are both hard to write, so I think you did a good job in portraying their emotions. The remark from Jade about Luke eating a larger portion of Natalia's cooking was wonderful.

This was an awesome story to read; great job on it!

Such a sweet little ending. Despite what you may think, I'd say that you wrote this chapter very well. It wouldn't have worked as well if you'd tried to make it any more fluffy--it just wouldn't suit how Luke and Tear are in the game.

I look forward to the next fic that you post.

Aw, cute! You portrayed Jade and Anise rather well--I enjoyed it. ^^ And the last line was so great. XD Poor Guy...

Well, I could sit here and type on for a while, but I see that you have that third chapter up, so I am off to read it!

And this brings it to an end, huh? I thought this one was very nice; it actually fit well into this.

^^ Great job!

=D Another great chapter! ^^ Jade's too nice to Anise xD

^^ Can't wait for the Tear x Luke chapter! =3

So you did manage to get this done in time, huh? Wow. It's nice. ^^

Jade's too soft, lol.

Yay, Picup fluff!

... Um, what happened to that other fic you were working on?

Aw, how cute..x3

I absolutely loved the voice that you used in this. The thinking back to what happened before where the reader started in was wonderfully done, and I liked how you portrayed Natalia's reluctance of getting help, even if she really does need it.

I look forward to the next chapter...though I'll probably miss the GuyxNatalia fluff xDD; But if it's anything as well-written as this, I certainly won't mind Anise and Jade (of course, I like them too, so it will be perfect x3 -shot-)

Excellent job on this; can't wait to read more!

Lol, so a three shot eh? Sounds pretty interesting.
Well, I have to agree that Jade and Anise make a good pair...on the battle field at least xP

So next one is Jade and Anise and the last is Tear and Luke. Funny how you were going to write Tear and Luke's first but ended up switching it. How ironic xP

Well, I guess what Guy said was true; when there's someone in need, gender doesn't bother him. It's kind of like he see's a person in need, they become block characters and not female or male XD Haha, kinda funny if you think it like that xP

Keep it up!

Hooray for last-minute titles and summaries! XD (I think I'm the master of those...)

Anyway, as I said in the GuyXNatalia fanclub, this first chapter is SO adorable. I really felt as though you got their characters dead-on, and the ending was so very cheesy... I loved it! xP

I'm still a tad taken aback whenever you randomly switch tenses from line to line, though. I was sure that I had seen some points where you did that, but glancing back I can't find any... >.< Oh well. You can ignore my grammatical nitpicky-ness, because it obviously wasn't a huge deal if I can't even find it again. ^^;;

I look forward to reading the upcoming chapters! (The interaction in-game between Anise and Jade is great; I'm anxious to see how you portray their friendship.)

Picup you have outdone yourself again it was really good and by that meaning like the one I requested before yet I love it,I really like the part at the end that said

The Princess could sleep soundly tonight.

For her knight in shining armor was there to protect her.

I tought that part was so cute!Well as always I'll always review your wonderful stories!

Well, in the case of a three-shot, let's see how the others are doing as well. I'm actually glad that their feelings were quite mutual from the get-go, rather than a sudden 'I love you' type of thing. It just seems so perfect with the way you've written it.

On that note, I did notice a switch somewhere along the line in the tenses. It kinda took me by surprise a bit, but not enough for me to stop reading. Just wanted to point that out, ^^.

Well, now I'm waiting for your next one, then. ^^