hahahha i love this

Loved the story!

Awesome! Thats the only word that can discribe this chapter. Please write more.

Very good. I hope I can read more but you haven't updated in a long, long time.

all i can criticize is how short it is considering how only one chapter has been released to leave me hooked and waiting for another catch. the last thing i need this year is a lasting addiction...=P
if possible could you update soon?

i love the cap

(raises eyebrows in approval) I've been waiting for someone to write a fic like this (though I probably wouldn't even know if they did...)

I really like it! You portray Artemis and Butler very well! The only thing I see to critique is Minerva. She's a little OOC. I'd expect her to be more disbelieving, and then, when talking to Artemis, demanding where he's been. That's the only thing I saw, though. It's really great!

Write on!!

NICE! Can't wait for the next update! I hope this is gonna be an A/M fan fic? Please? I haven't read really any A/H ones...they put me off :(

Anyways, really good, you captured their personalities perfectly :D

Just wanted to point out something. You said that 'The brain ceases its learning functions all together when a person sleeps'. I don't think that's true. Your brain actually reviews everything you have learnt when you sleep. That is why revising for a test the night before is better than revising in the morning. Your brain gets a chance to review all the stuff you've learnt that day.

Good work. Believable, and very satisfying! Keep it up!

M, finally remembered to take a peek. Anyway:

I like the rolling, gen feel to this. It flows nicely. You might want to slip into something slightly plottyish to make it continue to flow - perhaps introduce some issue(s) that come from him being gone. Lots of fun ones to think of. Anyway, having a sense of conflict there that needs to be resolved (unless you've got something in mind) would give this thing shape and such.

Otherwise, it's quite nice so far. Nice, rolling, fuzzy feeling to it. Good mechanics. People nicely IC. Perhaps more attention to Artemis' emotions, versus mostly his thoughts and coverups and such.

*agh* my brain's not working today. Feel free to ask for a clarification if I'm confuzzling.

Woah. That was pretty good. What happens next!?
[yeah, Ed-chan is impatient; big surprise there. *rolls eyes*]
Write about the Twins!

Hah. S'lovely, such a pleasure to read. I can't wait for more *_*...

Hojo-chan! I love how you used a language similar to Colfer's style! It was really neat and made it much more realistic. The way you captured the characters was great too!

I have to say, there were things I don't think Artemis would quite say, but again, the language and diction of his speech made it very very much like him. XD

And the convo between artemis and Minerva! Lmao...adorable! "Artemis, vaguely smiling and wondering why Minerva kept saying his name..." Lol!

One of my favorite things about Colfer's work is his diction and style of writing. The fact that you copied it for your fanfic makes it a true fanfic indeed. (And it even has his style of humor! =D ) Keep up the great work, girl! XD

Wow, this was a really good story! I didn't really know what was going on at first, but I figured it out fine later on. I love how you made his personality just like it was in the books. I think your writing is getting awesome. Great job, and I'm waiting for the next chapter. :)

Wow! You're such a great writer! I really like the way you solved Artemis' eye color problem! (I should've thought that myself :)
Great job!