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Star Wolf2
2009-11-07 . chapter 7
AH! How could you end there x.x write more? It's been FOREVER since i;ve read PSoH and... gah T.T

Please write more? Please? >.>

<.< Thank you for writting it. I'd just finished reading a Saiyuki fic of yours (A Dog's Life) and found this one, and would definitely appreciate a few more chapters!!
dongha
2009-10-27 . chapter 7
OH NO! Still no update! Please don't kill this story! Update when you can - preferably soon!
LadyEtelka
2009-07-01 . chapter 7
minor plot-bunny up for adoption.

What if Taizu decided to send some "Theives" to the Pet shop to ransack D's office for evidence?

later on Leon might wonder in Taizu's presence how T-chan got so fat and what do Totetsu's eat anyway?
genderless-but straight
2009-06-10 . chapter 6
though i loovvee WAM i also loovvee Dappled! so i would really really love it if you would update at least this!!
rinariku
2009-06-06 . chapter 7
I love this story so far. When are you going to update it again? It would be a shame for it to just end here.
Andi
2009-05-11 . chapter 7
I really like this fanfiction so far; I wish you would continue it :(
Toxxica
2009-04-27 . chapter 7
I just wanted to say, I absolutely adored this fic. You got D and Leon's characters down pat! You cannot imagine how much I enjoyed reading. I can only hope that you might update it again someday, but of course it has been quite a while. I'll have to settle for imagining the rest, I suppose, which is of course always entertaining :P Best of luck with your writer's block!
rubysp
2009-02-21 . chapter 7
You.are.a.friggin.amazing.person!

I adore this fic to no ends and this totally cheered me up after my latest re-run of akino matsuri's masterpiece. Fanfiction is the best for curing my melancholy. Anyway, I'm so glad I found your fic because so far, out of the 10 or so I've read, you've nailed their personalities and interaction the best! Canon timeline + Shin PSoH + impending love (disaster) = my undying love.

Please please please don't ever abandon this fic and I'll wait years for you. *grovels*

Totally on the edge of my seat looking to the next chapter.

Cheers!!
cheriesluv
2008-12-27 . chapter 7
I was cracking up so hard the whole time I was reading this...Well, hope you update soon! C=
Jenaminya
2008-12-15 . chapter 7
Aww! D is so cute when he's in love
Enaty
2008-11-19 . chapter 7
Well, since you said yourself on your profile that one has to complain about updates, that's exactly what I'm going to do now...

Update. Please. Soon. DX You know it's just cruel to let this one stay unfinished, do you? I've been waiting for months for an update, and now decided that I'm going to ask for one (of course I could just have left a review earlier, but I'm afraid that I actually forgot, even though I simply love this story -.- )

Anyway, don't only want to complain, but give some credit like a good review writer, too...

What I particularly like about this is the fact that you're keeping them so in-character the whole time. I can just see it, those two sitting in the shop in Japan with Taizu, and all those newspapers, and Sofu D turning up to tip Leon off where his precious grandson is... XD That's something else that I like. That Sofu's apparently not too averse to the idea of Leon in the shop and actually helps him. Even if it's only for D's sake, you still make him more likeable than most other writers (including me) usually do, and that's real good since I DO like Sofu... He's just so old-fashioned sometimes. DX

There are some sentences that are just written by a genius, like last chapter "The blonde American's brain had officially shut down with the overload of information." Oh god, how I laughed at that one! Could look for the others, but I'm afraid I can't since I'm already running late...

Update. Please. Will puppy eyes help to underline my request?
Anna McNarin
2008-11-02 . chapter 7
I'd love to read more if you have it. :)
bob-sama
2008-10-12 . chapter 7
THIS IS AWESOME! Please keep writing!!
littlefoxling101
2008-09-16 . chapter 1
I have read your stoy before some time ago and had taken quit a shine to it. I would leave a review after reading your updated chapters but I'm afraid I'm short on time and may not get to do so for a while. Any wayI just wanted to tell you that I realy enjoy reading this story and that I'm sorry that I lurked it before. I never realized how frustrating it was to have hits but no reviews until I started writing my own stories. BTW if you might be interested in a Yu Yu Hakusho story stering Youko kurama and human Kurama could you read and review my story please? It's called Youko's Pet.
Shadowfox13
2008-08-10 . chapter 7
I really hope you write some more, I'm curious as to how D will manage to 1) get around Leon's...er...thick headed shyness (I get the feeling Leon's good as self-denial in some things) and 2) how he'll solve the whole 'not being able to keep Leon forever' issue.

Keep up the good work! ^.^V
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