. . . impressive. . . and you said you were bad at writing. . .

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE IT COOOL I WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS PLZ WRITE MORE.

*JUMPS ON A CHOCOBO AND TRYS TO RIDE TO THE NEXT CHAP BUT CRASHS*

Damn good! Is there any Ch2.?? ^_^

Very well-written!! This fic also shows how much Eiko always cheers up the others! She really cares for everyone, especially for Dagger, Vivi and Zidane. I don't understand that there are people who hate Eiko so much!

Hey, this story looks pretty good so far. I could picture it being used in the ending if they decided to include all those events. Some of the speech was a little out of character, but it was nothing major. Keep it up.

Hi! I really like how you wrote for all the different characters...you really captured their different personalities. :)

In one or two spots in this fic (like where Amarant calls Zi stupid), you seem to switch between observing the characters to commenting on them; it can be a little distracting. :) But anyways, I believe this is the first story I've come across for the 'gap' part of FF9's ending, and I really like it. Please continue!

*sniffles* The Pink Tonberry misses Zidane too. *cuddles Zidane plushie* Er, wait. I can just write him back. ^_^ On a technical note, though, try to avoid using so many ellipses (these '...') In many cases, they aren't neccessary and they break up the flow of the text. In situations where the dramatic pause is important to the dialogue, you can write in (___ paused in his speech). The narration was pretty good otherwise. I'll keep an eye out for chapter 2!