I admit I cried reading this but why is it rated M?

That's beautiful and sad. Very lovely. Good jod on this and keep up with writing and good luck on everything. Thar's reallu sad...

Oh, that left my heart heavy. So sad!

But good... :D

Whoa! That's all I can say! You have a very ** story! -in a good way- and have written it with perfect arrangement. Keep it up!

... Your story has left me sad and speechless. Good Job!

Wow. Very beautifully written, enjoyable.

Nice!

aww. how sad. ::tears: but it was good.