Why...why did you have to kill them. For a brief moment fond memories came back of one of the best games ever. But then...why...

But butchering aside good story. It's nice to have an unexpected ending.

I think _'

Hmm... it was interesting... well I was good the way you wrote rocked but the ending... needed a little work.

OK, this was pretty good, but the end of it SUCKED ASS! The story was to rushed, and the ending seemed like someone was kicking you off the computer and you had to finish the rest quickly. I mean, what kind of crap is "For a minute, the troops of the last remaining stronghold of the Humans grew vigilant and threw the forces of Darkness from their walls. Then, the forces of Hell came upon them and the walls fell. The gates of Heaven filled with the Hounds of Hell and the light failed. Locke and Celes were so overwhelmed by each other’s proclamation for love of each other, they didn’t notice as the walls fell in onto them. With this the forces of Evil reigned true and all perished under Kefkas’ final blow."

This story...where it come from...Get some advice. Tim Sales could prolly "GIVE YOU A LIL" MWHAHAHAHAHAH...anywho...didn't have time to read story i at lunch and me and atma bored. Cuz some fag didn't show up cuz he a whiney disc. oh well...bell fixin to ring.

k e r m i t

Ok so it wasn't one of my best works... I'll do better next time, really I will. But I don't see what was so bad about it. I mean, everything was there, love, action, humor, all of it. Well, not really any humor. But anyways, it wasn't one of my best works, really. I am soon to have another one out. This time about something I know more about than most, Robert Jordans "The Wheel Of Time" series. Kewl. Don't hold your breath, it may take me a little while...

Great story

What the hell! That is some wacked .

2 weeks later

this story sucks. Who ever heard of the bad guys winning within the final fantasy realm?

5 years later

learn your final fantasy 3 map for one thing and everything else.

1. lockes hair color.

2. ultima does not hurt the caster

3. location of figaro from the veldt.

4. how can locke see with his eyes shut?

to be continued...

the next day

on a scale of 1-100

final score "5" - just for making us laugh at this god forsakin story

To be quite honest, I did not like your story at all. Locke and Celes are made for each other and the power of love can defeat all, mwahahaha. Angel, learn to write hehe. Oh yea, call me!

AAARRRRRGHHHH! KEEP IT TO ONE FRIGGIN TENSE! tense changtes in ONE sentance!

NOOOOOO SETZER!

awwwww...so sad...