Are you going to add another chapter? Please do! I love your story and you should continue it. :)

soon my **... how you could you leave us with such a good set up? and a cliff hanger none the less! we deserve an explanation!



Good story update soon.

That was awsome! I really hope you update soon! XD So awsome! I love five year old Jacks personality! ^_^ Update soon!

It's really good. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter please have it up soon. :]

Great! that song is cool too. Please continue :)

Woah. Jack with a split personailty. I hope you update this soon!

Interesting... I loved the song! Please keep updating I like this story so far.

...wow...very origanal (sp?). update soon OK?...

Hmm... well, its
interesting, I'll
give you that. It
could do with a
bit more detail,
though. Still, Its
a good base, I
think you could
make a great story
out of it. If you
bother to update it,
that is.

Sensibly,
ScathingSarcasm

I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm always a sucker for uke angst!

awesome continue,un!

And? the next chapter?

Please I'm begging you, update, please.

Love your fic. I wanna know what will happen next.

C/K

I love it so far. Hope you continue writing this.

please continue... I'm very curious.