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| Bobboky 2007-01-23 ch 1,  | abuseinteresting |
| SSJ Guyver1 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat short story, although I can't help but feel as though it's incomplete. I mean, I know it's a little over 1k words, but it seems as though there is some middle story you missed. Ranma and Kasumi is a new favorite of mine (rougly 3 - 4 months) but I can feel the emotions,... although spelt wrong lol. Keep up the good work, and maybe use a pre-reader or something. I know your asking, i'm just stating what you needed in this story ^^. |
| JhyarelleDrakon 2007-01-10 ch 1, | abusenice |
| Bluedragon81 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuseWhile short and fairly sweet, even if somewhat sad. A good story over all. I did not see any grammar mistakes, and the characterizations are pretty good. It would be rather interesting if this could have another chapter or two added to it. Though I’m not sure myself just how I’d want too see it mapped out.. As for help with Beta reviewing; check out http://z14. |