Aww sweet and simple ♥ So adorable!
Hehe Zexion and his handcuffs |D *shakes head*

Aw that is actually quite cute... somehow... O_o... no coherent words... heheheheheh *grabs popcorn*

... weird, but okay XD

ZEXY HAS A HANDCUFF FETISH. =o

That's cool XD

oh...wat did they do?^^very great-o!

its short simple
sweet

i like it

How is this not in my favorites? Well, it is now. I love it!

Thus Demyx lost his virginity.

Tee hee! Naughty Zexy!

RL: Where did that come from? I haven't heard from you in like... EVER. Very... how should I put it... disterbing. Never would have seen those two together...

:3
loved it

hehe Zexy, Demy and cuffs
That's awesome. XD

Heheh. Horndog.

Kidding; 's good. You're prose is very, very nice; descriptive without being over-written, and simple without being rushed. Very good, very sharp.

I also think you got Demyx's "personality" (as much of one as a Nobody can have, anyway) down pat. I can't comment on Zexion, seeing as you don't see much of him.

That last part is my only real criticism of the story; well, that and the premise of Nobodies. However, due to my happy subscription to the doctrine that Nobodies love with their minds and souls instead of their hearts, that's something I'll brush aside.

So, all in all, very good, and handled very well through your prose. Congrats.

Tee-hee. Cute. *giggles* ^w^;