o.o This is a really great chapter. It's so cool to see Lily indulging in her Muggle side. Is her car a covertable?

And I enjoy how Peter is the one to come and track Lily down. You've shown a new side of Peter that I really appreciate, since every other fic I've read seems to have Peter as a villian only.

Kudos on a great chapter! (are you continuing? or is this it?)

i liked it but since when does peter have a spine and any wit? this character seems more like snape and goyle's love child- sarcastic and muscular. cant wait for the next chapter though- update soon!

Wow I have to say totally amazing story. The emotions and everything... well it's just beautifully written. I love it!!

One question... Has Sirius been seeing Lily this entire time?

- If he is seeing Lily I don't think that is in the canon Sirius' persoality. Canon Sirius would NOT backstab James by dating the woman he loved, nor would he randomly see her on the fly.

"In fact, if we grouped humans in a large lump, I’d wager that they are much more frightening than any coven of vampires or ravenous dragons."

- This oberservation is very striking to me. Humans are vicious and more frightening than any fantesy creature. I enjoyed how you tied this realization into the feelings and humanity of the characters. You have a practical, logical, and objective way of looking at the characters and that makes your stories much more powerful and thought altering.

Kudos on another great chapter.

"All because of one little doubt."

This is a deep concept that not many people understand. How powerful doubt it.

- You did a great job of setting up this chapter. The power of James' doubt and how it tore his and Lily's relationship apart shows its power and how it effect human emotions.

You have a talent for writing human emotion. You've made Lily and James more human and that is a great talent.

I would recommened re-reading through your chapters. There are a few missing words in key sentences. I noticed them because my brain added them in when they weren't typed there. I thought I'd mention it.

Kudos on a great chapter.

awesome story! please update asap! i am intrigued by the letter!

i love it :)
please continuee :D:D

I am SO happy you finally updated. Today's my birthday and you just made it the best one ever. Thank you Thank you Thank you. Absolutely wonderous job by the way.

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Great chapter, so glad you updated and I hope you update again soon. I was just wondering how long it has been since Lily left? Can't wait to read more.

Great fic. I hope this isn't going to turn out to be one of those stories, that I add to my favourite list, for it to only be abandoned. Please update soon.

omg! I love it!
I absolutely cannot wait until the next chapter

Your story is very well written and it really flows nicely

this is amazing, so real, thoguh a bit hard to follow

this is really interesting =) please update

Better than the last and equal to it at the same time. Are you writing more?

- Emory

LOVELY! write more, i beg of you!!