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aero13
2009-11-24 . chapter 4
interesting...i like it:)
averagepsychogirl
2009-11-21 . chapter 4
I love your story! It's so cool how you are telling two stories at the same time. I couldn't help but notice you haven't updated this story since 2008. Are you discontinuing it? If you are please reconsider. This story should have atleast 10 reveiws in my opion.
FrogsNeverDrink
2009-11-17 . chapter 4
Will she be Haku's friend in the upcoming story? I hope he stays alive!
j.
2009-11-17 . chapter 4
so far so good! pls continue!
JustWriter2
2009-10-09 . chapter 4
Do you plan on Sakura metting Itachi after the invasion?


-jw`chan
WinglessFallenAngel
2009-08-25 . chapter 4
I think I like this chapter the best.

The part with Sai is my absolute favorite for some reason, I'm not quite sure why... I guess it was... sweet, in a sense. I would love to see that happen in the manga-- he needs some love. D:

Also, the way Sakura helped Sasuke out was just sweet sweet revenge. He really deserved that haha xD

You haven't updated this fic in a while, which makes me sad, but... I hope you feel inspire enough to conintue lol. I'd love to see what happens in the (new?) Haku/Zabuza arc.

-- Wingless Fallen Angel
WinglessFallenAngel
2009-08-25 . chapter 2
First, before I blast off on how much I love this story (even though I'm only two chapters in), I just HAVE to mention how much of a great writer you are.

Although I wasn't there to read the original(s), your rewritten version is just simply... amazing. It's detailed, but not so much that it would make the reader want to skip paragraphs. No. I was reading every word in every paragraph like my life depended on it! The way you've written Sakura's thoughts, emotions and feelings are very believable too, keeping her in character. Perfect. Your grammar and spelling is also excellent!

Two chapters in and already, I'm in love. LOL xD

-- Wingless Fallen Angel (who is getting ready to read more) :D
SakuraGaara
2009-08-02 . chapter 4
wow.
awesome!
-SmilingArtist-
2009-07-19 . chapter 4
I really can't wait till the next chapter.
This story's really good.
Wonder when Itachi's gonna appear?
Please update soon!

-Setsuna
10000 Dead Roses
2009-07-12 . chapter 4
This is one of the best timetravel stories I have read! The whole 'Akatsuki/Sakura' thing is very intriguing and it is nice to see this is not the typical plotline, it is very original. ;)
Favored
2009-06-24 . chapter 4
Oh. The mission with Zabuza and Haku and the bridgebuilder... Wonder how that will turn out. XD
Favored
2009-06-24 . chapter 3
A Sakura timetravel story, and it's really good!
XD
wintersalad
2009-06-15 . chapter 4
hum...i like your writing:X i'll be stalking you for a while now:) hope to see this updated though. it's a promising beginning and i see there's been much effort placed in starting it.
NiminariAmriath
2009-06-11 . chapter 4
wow...i've read some of these were they go back and lots of them dont have that...something to them that makes them readable
crystal teardrops
2009-05-02 . chapter 4
Wow, the first actually good time fic I've read! Nice job, I hope you haven't forgotten about it though, this would be a great story to continue!
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