that was hilariously sweet! i can completely see that happening! well done!

lol. Excellent characterization and I thought your description of the tenstion both men carried was great. good stuuf.

aw. well written. i do think though, that if they'd tried to get together they could have. what's most important in a relationship besides that trust and comfort and fun they have together? and they were both willing to try, adn really, in the end, sex is sex. it would have worked.

This was truly brilliant! Both of them so in character. I couldn't decide whether to roll on the floor laughing or melt into goo at how sweet & clueless they were. Thank you for writing this!

How more people didn't leave you reviews I don't know! This fic is *fabulous* and so very realistic! Thanks for sharing! Though I'd have liked to see it as a series lol. The first-date fic, the third-date fic, first *night* :P etc

You're trying to kill me again, aren't you?! Asphyxiation by means of acute hilarity!! There were seriously parts where I had to peek, one phrase at a time, between hurricane-force gales of laughter, just to get through a paragraph--because I certainly wasn't going to stop reading long enough to let the laughter subside; I would have been here until NEXT Christmas!

And the best part of it is, you not only have an incredible gift for humor, you also have just about the best John and Rodney I've read--so close to canon, I can hear and see them perfectly, as though I was watching Joe and David play the scene; and yet so much better, even! Because the show just gives the broad strokes, really, of the friendship, and you have the real deal here in writing. Thank you so much, Bladelover!! =)

I would have reviewed this sooner, but I had to wait until I could breathe and see again. This is by far the funniest thing I have read in ages. Talk about two guys in need of a big dose of ept! Your dialogue is exquisite, as is your narrative.
The best!
Thanks for sharing. This will be a favorite.

Priceless story! So very good Sheppard/McKay friendship. It made me laugh and hold in my breath on several ocasions and te surprising ending felt really right. Hope you'll write lots more! ;) V.

Aw, poor John. Poor Rodney. I just want to hug them. And slap them. And stand back and point at them and go, 'BWAHAHAHAHA!'

I liked this a lot. And Rodney's summation was great:
“We’ve gotta be the only guys in history to ever have gotten relief from not getting laid.”

This was a good exploration of John & Rodney's relationship. Thanks for sharing!