good story. well-written

What a nice story, Lauriel, very touching and well written!
I loved the bickering between John and Rodney (as I always do) and the infirmary scenes with Carson.
Thank you very much for writing this fic, as it is another example of your immense talent as an author!
I honestly love your work.

Loved this Lauriel it was fab, really well written and descriptive and eek bugs!! Went from giggling to gasping and back to giggling. loved the line...
“I’m resigning my commission. Gonna hunt bugs.”
it made me giggle.

Realy nicely done

Nice. Poor Shep, he never gets a break with bugs does he? :D

Great story! I liked it!

Just wanted to say thanks again because I really, really love this. You did such a fantastic job. Oh, and I forgot to mention how much I loved John trying to resign so he could exterminate bugs. That was hilarious!! YOU ROCK!!

Very good...a fine mix of humour and angst...you have a easy writing style and you kept the story flowing very nicely. Thank you.

This was a wonderful read! Really whumpy and tense, full of humour too. I loved the medical aspects, which were really convincing and beautifully executed - but spider bite?? That's my worst nightmare!Help! Poor Shep. Glad he got better in the end, and well done. An excellent ficcie!! :)

great story

I liked it. John and bugs - Good gosh will someone get that man some Off and a can of Raid!

Wonderful! There were many classic/LOL lines in here but my fav has to be: “I’m resigning my commission. Gonna hunt bugs.”

Great whumpage and great plot. I wouldn't have guessed the sunglasses thing as the offense, as I was reading into everything to see what the whumpage would originate from (though I was right about the bug). :D