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maniacslaugh 12/14/11 . chapter 5
I'm so happy Flame is alive. He grows on you, especially after his attempts to get Mustang and Hawkeye together.

Flame giving dating tips to the wizards was also quite funny.

So, when will Mustang and Hawkeye stumble into Flame's universe?
Lilly 12/28/09 . chapter 1
I just wanted to thank you for giving the brothers their bodies back, even if there not the main charachters or anything. (Although I will be perfectly fine with Ed not having both, or any, of his limbs back, I will loose some faith in mankind if Arakawa-sensei don't give Al his body back.) Even though I don't like "other worlds"-idea that much, reminds me of the anime T.T. I like the manga better...

Thank you, anyway!
Kyasarin-Maarukeehii1 3/4/08 . chapter 1
Oh my God, if I had known there was a sequel to Seeing Double, I would have read this a long time ago! And it's a Harry Potter crossover! That makes it even better! Great chapter XD

*cackles at your word choices* You are brilliant!
Apathetical 2/16/08 . chapter 5
Great story, the first and the second.

I look forward to when you update...

My best friend looks forward to the day when my spelling and grammar don't scare her...personaly I say it's never going to happen!
Neopuff 1/24/08 . chapter 5
Man..if I didn't watch some of the movies or look at spoiler-y comics...I'd be SO confused right now xD

Harry Potter...and FMA...XD; Wow.

But isn't Dumbledore gay? Or is that something to be discovered in a later chapter? xD
Ruingaraf 12/19/07 . chapter 5
Ammusing.

Hawkeye meeting her double is going to be absolutely priceless. ("Just put down the gun. Really. Please stop shooting at people. They're mistaking you for me, which is becoming a problem.")

XD

Mustang meeting Riza is going to be interesting, too. He'll be all the more thankful of Hawkeye's comparatively calm nature.

Toss in more Hawkeye-Havok platonic fluff? It makes me squee.

I hope you get back to this soon.
Jessi Tsuki 5/3/07 . chapter 5
I laugh at this. XD It's funny. Hope you get it worked out .
AerinM 3/28/07 . chapter 5
Oh, you kill me. "Honeybunch"? XD HAHAHA.

Ok, so this review is... pretty late... ; hahaha. I actually read this chapter the day that you published it. I've just slacked off, I guess. I thought I'd already reviewed this chapter, actually ;; Hehe.

In response to you:

YES! This is the first crossover fic I've read! :D HAHA. And it's so intentionally out-of-character that it's funny! :D This chapter made me laugh a few times, just FYI. So much fun!

Oh, and just to show how lifeless I have been in the past (I don't usually write reviews all that often, but I used to [when I was a freshman] write reviews ALL the time), this is officially my 508th written review :D Hahaha. That's actually really sad... no wonder I have no boyfriend, I'm too busy reading about them (lol).

Anyway, in review to the story:

Honeybunch... *snicker, snicker*

Flame ROCKS :D Haha. I like his irresponsibility, though it's so unlike actual manga Roy. Hahaha :D It makes me smile!

AGH! Did you read this last chapter? Roy was in it for like... 2 pages! *squee* I LOVED IT! (I am having severe "Roy's unit" withdrawls, hahaha.) And the girls! XD HAHAHAHAHA! That only adds fuel to my Royai brain, though. Haha.

I've GOT to go. Hehehe. I'll talk to ya later!

AerinM

PS Update soon, by the way! XD
Legendary Chimera 3/6/07 . chapter 5
Hmm, I have a sneaking suspicion the alert system is failing again. Dear Lord, could you imagine if one of the students happened to walk in on one of Flame's lessons? I can't even begin to imagine a clean shaven Snape, the horror! I'm glad you got some inspiration, especially if that means making Flame paranoid that an omniscient presence is watching him!
OTP 3/6/07 . chapter 5
riza...honeybunch...* falls over laughing hysterically* omg i cant imagine that lol nice job girl keep it up
AerinM 2/21/07 . chapter 4
Hahaha. That was definitely great, with Dumbledore and everything... XD Hahahahaha.

I have never read an FMA/Harry Potter crossover before. Can you believe it? ;) Actually, I don't think I've even ever read a crossover before, period. Hah. So, technically, your story is the first! I thought the OOC-ness was actually pretty funny.

Uh-oh. What will happen with the transmutation? Will the three survive? Will they end up in the right world? Will Roy lose the book? Find out in the next chapter!

I don't know where that came from ;

Anyway, I've got to get going. However, I have one question to ask: do you read/have you read the manga?

Ciao!
OTP 2/20/07 . chapter 4
yay you updated and its a cliffy no fair lol update soon
Legendary Chimera 2/20/07 . chapter 4
Gah! You stopped there? The mention of the Elric bros was perfect:) I think we all share Flame's shock in regards to Dumbledore. Too funny!
Anne Packrat 2/20/07 . chapter 4
Hey, cliffhanger! Love Flame in the Potterverse and I'm looking forward to seeing how he handles the Read or Die universe (I'm still convinced that Schiezka is related to Yomiko). And if Mustand and the others want to pop over to my universe they're welcome.

Great job, and I hope to read more from you soon.
AerinM 2/8/07 . chapter 3
Hahaha. Okay, sorry, I didn't realize that you'd updated -which is weird, considering that I do have you on alert :)

I like this chapter, it makes me happy. I especially liked the Harry Potter reference... XD Haha. As always, I'll be awaiting an update!

In response to your response:

I completely understand what you're saying! I get really frustrated with people who write Roy as being way too irresponsible, or when they make him do certain things that would end up hurting Hawkeye-because he doesn't do that. I mean yeah, he does like to play around occasionally, but he is quite mature. And now I am beginning to rant :3

I love your story and, again, it makes me smile :)
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