this is pretty good, how old r u again?

Jess xoxo

PMASAP!

Really like it!

this is good horrible about tasha hope they get help.

OMG! This is so awesome. But I just have one thing to say. I think you should of waited a bit before you put Martha and Jack back together and Tash and Rob. Like maybe Tash survived the bullet shot and Martha and Rob went back home and then they like fought or something then Jack rang and said that Tash was in hospital because of something maybe her liver started failing or something then all of that could of happened with Tash and Rob getting back together and Martha and Jack. That would of also made your chapters longer but otherwise this story is really good.

Like it!

this is good i like it.

my favourite characters are robbie and tasha don't let anything happen to them.

wow i really good story! hope martha and jack end up together!
they are supposed to be together lol
please kept going

this is good that wasa surpise

this is good why do i have a bad feeling about my favoutite character.